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Subject: Unknowable Harlem, Shield Agent Sun Aug 12, 2012 2:53 am
Unknowable Harlem
The Biography
Birth Name: Michael Thompson Aliases: Unknowable Harlem, Eisen Gender: Male Age: 24 Birth Date: 5/21/1987 Composed Material: Steel Class: Machine
Appearance:] Normally Michael wears a black suit, with two pure gold cuff links and a white undershirt. This complements his black hair which he wears combed backwards. His green eyes are a pure light green which peer into your soul. When he enters his exoskeleton armor, it can very in shades of blue, sometimes very dark colored other times very light. The secondary set of colors various from pure gold to pure blue. He is normaly 6'0 and 170 pounds, in the suit he is 7'5 and 900 pounds
Personality: Not really sure how this happened but Michael is a womanizer of sorts. Not one to be taking most to a liking ether he mostly ignored people. Made very sarcastic commits and always being witty of sorts. This would define who he was a witty guy who enjoyed tits and bear. Despite his yearning for scientific designs he really loathed work and never really cared for it and blew it off a lot. BUt his genius allowed him to be sucessful in life.
—Main Power Source: Incomplete Arc Reactor (Yellow) —Sub Power Source:
—Name: Everybody has Guns:) —Rank: C —Body Part: Top wrist —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: The second largest slot is on both of his wrist it is a .50 caliber bullet, which has a heavy impact, it has a firing rate of 3 bullets per second. It has a caring capacity of 200 bullets. This gun is accurate up to 300 meters and fires at the regular rate of what a .50 is fired at. He
—Name: Flight Boots —Rank: C —Body Part: Feet —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: It is simple a add on to the bottom of the Eisen's boots, it also makes a small modification to the hands for stability during flight. Allows for flight and hovering. Can go up too 300 mph. This can stabilize from an explosion or movement that is at C ranked level, they can be used to do many things the boots alone can lift up to 90,150 newtons at a head on collusion and only hold it for a few seconds. The actually thrust capabilities are roughly 2,000 pounds at a standing lift. This is consider to be used at maximum power of the flight boots using up a full power.
—Name: Uborious Electronics —Rank: C —Body Part: Insides of processing unit. —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: It looks like a regular circuit board but at a molecular level is much different from normal electronics. This allows to conduct an arc reactor without it exploding or malfunctioning. This adds 4 power slots to the total capability of the Eison suit.
—Name: Uborious Armor —Rank: C —Body Part: Enitre Body. —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: A very thick layer of metal protects the outter verison of the suit, this makes it appears to be bulkier. Making a decrease in general movement by 20 mph , it is not visible at his stops almost all C ranked melee and makes it take multiple clips from a many assault rifles and hmg gun to destroy the suit, making them more or less useless against the suit. Although a few shots from an anti-material rifle will take the suit down. The suit can now take explosive damage from hand grenades with only minimal damage. It would take 2 grenades to take it out.
—Name: Various Fun! —Rank: C —Body Part: A thin strip of anti heat around the inside of the metal —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: This provides a small patch of heat resilience, it can stop heat from effecting anything and burning the user up. Max currently 1,000 C.
—Name: Increased Movement —Rank: C —Body Part: Inside of Arm's and Legs —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: The structure of the suit that adds a quite speed, it has been slimmed down and created to look much better, well adding a increased movement to 50 mph.
—Name: Flares —Rank: C —Body Part: The Calves of the Armor —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: A large flash of heat and light. Throws of heat seeking missiles, and can blind up to a 3 meter radius for a post.
[list] —Name: Improved Strength —Rank: C —Body Part: Location on the arms small pench bracers that go over the arms/ —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: ]: This add on give additional strength, adding 1,000 pounds to the strength of the suit.
—Name: Multiple Optics —Rank: C —Body Part: Heads Up Display —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: They are not seen by anyone as they are pulled up in front of the Eisen mask, no real effects are done to the outside appearance. This gives Eisen thermal, inf-red, and night vision capability. This also adds on a zoom of 1,000 meters.
—Name: Nades —Rank: C —Body Part: Wrist under —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: This is a grenade launcher, it fires out a regular m67 and it explodes on impact. Speed is 200 mph. It has a total of 6 rounds, 3 on each one. They launchers are both underneath the suits wrist. Range 50 meters
—Name: Gas Dispensers —Rank: C —Body Part: Sides of wrist —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: The user can fire two rounds of laughing gas which combined cover 8 meter radius. They are shot and disposed of from the wrist. The uses only has 4 rounds total. 30 feet at maximum firing range. This causes someone to laugh uncontrollable for 3 post not being able to perform combat. This is caused by nitrous oxide.
—Name: Supa Strength —Rank: C —Body Part: Under Parts of legs and Arms —Power Source: —Description: This allows the suit to lift up to 1,000 pounds of weight over head and throw it 2-3 meters. This is possible by hydraulic that are extended under the plated armor on both the legs and arms.
Modifications:
FLAWS
Flaw Name: Wasted Power Flaw Type: Prolonged Use Flaw Flaw Description: The power cell has a limited amount of energy. 16 power slots to be exact, with flight and hovering taking up a small amount. Traveling at top speed in flight can absorb 6 points per post. Firing small arms blast only take up 1 point per post. While using the larger blast takes up 6-8 depending on the charge. It can currently with the level of arc reactors only have a strength of 16. He can carry power cells which slip into the chest and replace the current one. But this would require him to take off the suit and place the new cell in. The flight speeds absorption rate is 100-200 mph -2 point per post, 200-400 mph 4 points per post, 400-600 5 points per post and 600-800 6 points per post. It also takes up 4 points to lift a half ton object and throw it, and only 2 point to just lift it up over head. The leg mechanics are the same but twice as strong.
Flaw Name: Batteries Low Flaw Type: Recharge Flaw Flaw Description: This causes the suit to run out of energy when a power is used constitutively. If small blast are used 4 times in a row they need a 4 post recharge. If non combat flight is used 3 times it needs a recharge of 3 post. If combative flight is used 2 times it needs a recharge of 4 post. If a Major blast is used it needs a recharge time of 6 post. These all each or separate in use and recharging. A user can exert power to instantly recharge in one post but can't move for 1 post, 2 post if recharging for major blast. Also the charging up of a Major Beam is 1 post before being able to fire. For lifting as it takes little energy actually to perform it one can use it 8 times and need a 2 time regen. The regen time is constant from the time of its use.
Flaw Name: Oh, no the suits not on! Flaw Type: Transformation Flaw Flaw Description: This takes one post to put the suit on. Then a system boot up is required which takes another post before systems are activated. During this phase he can only move with the power of a regular human.
Flaw Name: Hit the Chest Flaw Type: Bane Flaw Flaw Description: A serious weakness is the chest, it can be fired upon and struck with only a few gun shots to the large glowing blue thing, the entire suit can explode and become un usable. This would not kill the person in sign most likely knock them out or prevent them from exiting the suit.
Skills:
[list] —Name: Incomplete Arc Reactor —Specialty: Professor —Rank: C —Description: Years of intense study allowed for him to create a new type of power source more powerful ever then before. The arc reactor. This gives him the power to create and repair and fix a very small fuel cell. This is more powerful then any know power source. But currently it can only be made in very small quantities. If made larger it can explode, its actually power source is only about half a dimes size. There is also something else fundamental wrong with it, for some reason it glows bright yellow.
—Name: Genius —Specialty: Professor —Rank: C —Description: This just allows him to learn things quicker. Any skills involving working or creating or adding onto Eisen knocks off 5%
—Name: (Unlocked at B rank) —Specialty: —Rank: —Description:
The Background
History:Michael grew up in a orphanage tinkering with toys and not really showing any signs of uniqueness. As days progressed he started to show more and more signs of being special. Passing all of his test with As and doing well in school finishing high school with a 4.9. After finishing college meeting a few girls on the way, he never really had a solid person or best friend. He was very social people generally liked him, but he was never able to form a real friendship with anyone. Finally he was able to get a job at a nuclear physics company . At the age of 20 he began working for them and for the next 3 years he started to advance into a new type of energy. After the first few years he was able to create an arc reactor which was quickly dismissed as no know element could withstand it nor circulate it to good use. Michael then spent a year working in attempts to fix and correct a metal that would work for the metal finally with a mixture of the small element Hochburg, he was able to create a sustainable source. Within creating it before he could release this new found element and power source to the world. He was taken from where he worked in the middle of the night. Over the past few years of working on this Michael had run out of money and into debt he thought this could bring him out of debt. But his own power source though effective was still extremely expensive. This is when Michael received his first contract. That night S.H.I.E.L.D asked him to create a new type of weapon a way to make this power source working. After a year of working on the suit and making sure the prototype was combat ready, he was moved to field agent. Given the code name Unknowable Harlem, this was now his time to use his suit he had been working on for so long to be put to the test. By no other besides himself. He although did keep all of these plans a secret and away from S.H.I.E.L.D so they couldn't replicate the suit. This didn't really force S.H.I.E.L.D to do anything but they decide instead of losing all of his work to allow him to be a field agent and travel around the world performing missions for the organization.
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Lone Star
Posts : 345 Join date : 2012-06-04
Subject: Re: Unknowable Harlem, Shield Agent Mon Aug 13, 2012 2:03 am
First off.. That suit I dun like it. Denied. You know why. That shit just aint flying at C-Rank. Not to mention a hero on this site couldn't lift 2Ton right off the bat. That Basic Gun skill. I dun like it either. It has to go. Thats more of something you get as a weapon and buy it or some shizzle. As for those flaws I don't recall Nameless saying anything bout peeps creating new flaws. You have a weapon named Pulse Fire but thats all it actually says. If its apart of that suit and it is short for "Repulsor Fire" I dun like it and its denied. Good day sir.
Mr.Red
Posts : 91 Join date : 2012-05-27
Subject: Re: Unknowable Harlem, Shield Agent Mon Aug 13, 2012 2:30 am
I still don't like it. As for your skills I see them more as abilities or something and not skills. Items atleast.
Unknowable Harlem
Posts : 37 Join date : 2012-08-12
Subject: Re: Unknowable Harlem, Shield Agent Mon Aug 13, 2012 2:40 am
I re did most of this anyone who has seen it should re look over it. I have made various edits.
Gabriel
Posts : 101 Join date : 2012-06-28 Location : Kuwait
Subject: Re: Unknowable Harlem, Shield Agent Mon Aug 13, 2012 6:05 am
Approved unless someone has any objections, go a head and use em. :3
Unknowable Harlem
Posts : 37 Join date : 2012-08-12
Subject: Re: Unknowable Harlem, Shield Agent Tue Aug 14, 2012 4:06 am
First, for materials it is made out of, you need to choose on basic element, and it can be upgraded as you rank up. But for now, it needs to be something basic.
—Name: Pulse Blast —Rank: C —Body Part: Hand —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: Fires from hands a blast that is about as strong as an assault rifle although it leaves burn and scorching and rips through metal unlike an rifle. This can be fire from each hand at 1 per second. Vision accuracy is only 300 meters, but if a computer program was involved would be 1,000 meters. The blast also travels 3 times faster then a regular M-16.
This is ridiculous. Tone this down. 300 meters accuracy that can rip through metal. 1000 meters with a computer program? Do you know how far that is? No energy ray is a sniper rifle, and if it travels 3 times faster than a regular M-16 it needs to be toned down ridiculously. In this one power, you have not only accuracy and length. But power and speed aswell. You need to focus on one aspect at C rank.
—Name: Uborious Armor —Rank: C —Body Part: Enitre Body. —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: It is an extremely thin layer of the metal almost like a coating, it is not visible at his stops almost all C ranked melee, making them more or less useless against the suit. B ranked are more effective and only damage the suit slightly after a full burst from a tank or so the suit would be destroyed but keeping the user a live and hopefully not trapped. Although a few shots from an anti-material rifle will take the suit down, it would take 4 men firing on full auto to severely damage the suit and force the user to retreat. The suit can now take explosive damage from hand grenades with only minimal damage. It would take 2 grenades to take it out.
It's fine being able to take most C ranked melee. However, B ranked up attacks barely damaging the suit is a no go. Especially after being hit by a Tank. Also taking four men to fire on the suit at full auto, when this suit is still C ranked, is ridiculous. All those shots coming at you with that kind of power would do more than enough damage to get through a C rank body. You, in response to this, could say your arms have more armor on them to defend against firearms your rank and below, making it an effective shield against firepower. But whole body at C rank is pushing it. Save that for higher ranks.
—Name: Magnetic Deflection —Rank: C —Body Part: Core of power supply. —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: This changes anything that has metal in it to alter course. Effective range at current rank 10 meters, the magnet can change the course and alter its course to miss the Eisen suit it can do this with bullets and blades. It uses no power as it is a permanent magnet. The magnet field however doesn't effect anything within an inch of the suits outer cover. So firing from point blank would go past this. The magnet is un see able as it is placed around the arc power modulator.
This needs to be activated and have a 3 post cooldown after use. No all the time up magnetic abilities. Not even mutants get this who have it as their main ability.
—Name: Geoffry —Rank: C —Body Part: Helmet —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: This does any calculations and gives warnings about various things. Also showing and identfing any enemies within a 30 meter radius by sending out a flux wave to identify people. It can also show combat styles and give suggestions and help with combat moves and even if needed can engage evasion sequence to run away from a person if the operator is knocked out, non combat though just running . This can also hack and defend at a C ranked level.
Fine with this, however it seems to be doing abit too much for one modification. The one thing that makes me wave the white flag is "combat styles" seeing how combat styles should be programmed after dealing with the style, not during the same process of combat unless it is a basic well known style. You also need to elaborate on how this computer program can hack something else. That needs to be specific on how exactly that is going down.
—Name: AI support —Rank: C —Body Part: Helmet —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: ]: it has no appearance although it is a program that slows down things for the user of Eisen. This allows for the user of the suit to dodge any handgun fired at the person. With this capable it is hard for one to hit the Eisen even if being fired at by a large group with hand guns.
This makes no sense. How is this Helmet slowing down things exactly? And even if it did, not everyone has the same method of shot. Meaning you'd be able to dodge and average shot fire by someone without specific training in the field. aka, if Hawkeye is taking aim at you, you're not dodging him like you'd dodge some random thug pointing a gun at you on the street.
—Name: Gas Dispensers —Rank: C —Body Part: Sides of wrist —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: The user can fire two rounds of laughing gas which combined cover 8 meter radius. They are shot and disposed of from the wrist. The uses only has 4 rounds total.
How far are these shot out?
—Name: EMP Reboot —Rank: C —Body Part: Entire —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: This allows for in one post to reboot systems and keep working.
How many times can this be used in a topic? Cause by logic's stand, it is draining something to get that juice back up. The amount of times can increase by rank.
—Name: Genius —Specialty: Professor —Rank: C —Description: This just allows him to learn things quicker. Any skills involving working or creating or adding onto Eisen knocks off 5 prestige or 100 words.
5% discount max for C rank skills that do this on prestige and wordcount.
—Name:Dark Force Constructs —Rank:C-S(Currently at B-Level) —Power:Dark Force Constructs —Description: The user of this ability can create tangible weaponry or constructs from Dark Force. These constructs are mentally-controlled solid objects possessing the density of steel such as pincers, rings, columns, and spheres, or as beams of concussive force thus causing the Darkforce to behave like either matter or energy.The user could form objects with a maximum density of 75-700 pounds per cubic inch, and resistance to concussive forces of up to 125-800 pounds per square inch (700 pounds of TNT at 20 feet) dependent upon rank(C-Level being the lowest numbers of course). He can form objects with a maximum volume of approximately 40-750 cubic feet, sufficient to encompass ten human beings comfortably. These objects are solid and well defined while he consciously wills them to be. If he is knocked unconscious the constructs fade into nothingness. If course the higher the rank the stronger the constructs.
This is one of the reasons I think my stuff isn't crazy. As you think, but whatever. I am edited. I only point this out is because Nameless used this crazy shit against me. Besides I don't think you have ever been on a firing range Flash, 1,000 meters may be 1 kilometer but it is an easy shot if you are marksman and have a good scope. Quite a few expert level can hit the target easily. Most modern rifles are accurate up to 300 meters and quite a few accurate up to 1,000 meters. Such as the LA85A2 or the Mk 17. I know guns xD. Everything else I don't have any real problems with. I will still edited everything. Oh I forgot computers can tell you wind trajectory and bullet drop and stuff like that for firing at long ranges. Also I guess I have to explain the AI also a computer thinks and reacts at much faster spends then humans ever could, therefore transferring this capability to make things much simpler to avoid dodging, I have a helmet on so the computer can show things at a slower rate for me and help react in real time. Also I'd ask you to look at my Flaws. You might then see why I asked for some heavy duty stuff, lol Also as I was going through, actually in fact hawk-eye would be easy to dodge then a gun men due to the bullets firing at a slower rate, this is all based upon the CPU processor being able to handle the information, which infact I have to nerf this quit a lot. EMP don't zap energy, haha they fry electronics so I guess I should have explained more they destroy transmeters which produce power and make it powerless besides frying all of the electronics unlike most power supplies mine doesn't work on electricty it works on arc reactor which won't be effected by a emp. While also destoring anything with a computer chip or plugged into a power socket. I guess I should have explained more my fault. I feel bad now most of this is just me not explaining things well enough. Fixed most of it, I hope. Let me know if I missed something. Also deleted one ability and added 200 words to training post and add strength https://marvelunlimited.forumotion.com/t653-training-advancedment-in-the-suit#2884
—Name: Flares —Rank: C —Body Part: Calves of boots —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: A large flash of heat and light. Throws of heat seeking missiles, and can blind up to a 3 meter radius for a post.
Blinding hmm? And boosts have calves? Maybe just calves of the armour? How long does it blind them for?
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—Name: Magnetic Deflection —Rank: C —Body Part: Core of power supply. —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: This changes anything that has metal in it to alter course. Effective range at current rank 10 meters, the magnet can change the course and alter its course to miss the Eisen suit it can do this with bullets and blades. It uses no power as it is a permanent magnet. The magnet field however doesn't effect anything within an inch of the suits outer cover. So firing from point blank would go past this. The magnet is un see able as it is placed around the arc power modulator.
Permanent Magnet? So does that mean you have to avoid metal buildings and the like? Or are you string enough to overcome the pull, if so, is there a speed redux?
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—Name: Uborious Armor —Rank: C —Body Part: Enitre Body. —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: It is an extremely thin layer of the metal almost like a coating, it is not visible at his stops almost all C ranked melee and makes it take multiple clips from a hand gun to destroy the suit, making them more or less useless against the suit. Although a few shots from an anti-material rifle will take the suit down, it would take 1 man firing on full auto to severely damage the suit and force the user to retreat. The suit can now take explosive damage from hand grenades with only minimal damage. It would take 2 grenades to take it out. This also provides heat Resistance of anything that doesn't metal the metal, which has a boiling point of steel.
Extremely thin? No can do kicker. Go look up Infinity Blade 2 and find some of the suits of armour from there.
Subject: Re: Unknowable Harlem, Shield Agent Fri Aug 17, 2012 12:34 am
Denied and already discussed in chat with several witnesses present. You may have Flash or Amatsu override my judgement, but until one of them say so, judgement stands as is.
Unknowable Harlem
Posts : 37 Join date : 2012-08-12
Subject: Re: Unknowable Harlem, Shield Agent Fri Aug 17, 2012 12:40 am
What you said means nothing and is pointless. I am not worried about what you say. You denied my topic in the claim that my flaws make the suit suck and pointless. Not sure what that means, but okay.
—Name: AI support —Rank: C —Body Part: Helmet —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: ]: This allows for the AI to come into combat and dodge and take over combat controls and keep up with dodging bullets at a rate of 1,400 fps aka the average handgun. The user gets a pop up screen on the left side showing what transpired.
No way hose. Sorry but you can dodge the actual aiming section of the firing process, but not the actual bullet speed itself. Similar to an adrenaline rush, you move before the bullet is fired, not during where the speed would easily still pierce you. This will easily be abused to dodge ANYTHING under bullet speed, including frontal attacks. Maybe at higher ranks, but at C, no. The AI support can predict trajectory on items it can lock onto, but it must lock onto a single object at a time, like one gun, one grenade, etc. It'll be able to map out the average pathway it may follow and then map a way around it before it's actually fired (if it's linear and easy to trace or if you have ample time to dodge it (such as a lobbed grenade or projectile, not something at ridiculously speeds)
—Name: Magnetic Deflection —Rank: C —Body Part: Core of power supply. —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: This changes anything that has metal in it to alter course. Effective range at current rank 10 meters, the magnet can change the course and alter its course to miss the Eisen suit it can do this with bullets and blades. It uses no power as it is a permanent magnet. The magnet field however doesn't effect anything within an inch of the suits outer cover. So firing from point blank would go past this. The magnet is un see able as it is placed around the arc power modulator. 3 post cooldown after use, requires activation. One might say myth busters proved this false but they were not experimenting with an arc reactor which increases the strength of the magnet and now one might think the suit would also be attracted to steel this is also false as it only using the magnet to synch to the bullet with the help of Geoffrey
Narrow the distance down from an inch to within four feet. Anything over five feet and the magnetic field will alter its path. Cause altering a bullet going at that speed from five feet would beat any magnet.
—Name: Pulse Blast —Rank: C —Body Part: Hand —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: Fires at a velocity of 2,000 mph and does the amount of damage as a handgun does. Accurate up to 100 meters.
This is extremely ridiculous on range, and I suspect before firing the palms would be seen generating a feint glow of light before the blast is released?
—Name: Pulsation —Rank: C —Body Part: Entire —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: If someone trys to move and change gears the suit has a defense system which pluses a blast disrupting there control over the suits body, it only effects inside the suit and the person in side.
Make sure this pulsation must be the same rank as the tampering. Also any cool down?
—Name: Geoffry —Rank: C —Body Part: Helmet —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: This does 3 simple things, It can help defend from a hack at C level rank, it can help the user run away when the user is knocked out, and show people within a 30 meter radius. Besides the important things it helps with the magnet, while allowing phone calls and googling anything.
How does it see people at a 30 meter radius. Is it like sonar or what?
—Name: Uborious Armor —Rank: C —Body Part: Enitre Body. —Power Source: Arc Reactor —Description: It is an extremely thin layer of the metal almost like a coating, it is not visible at his stops almost all C ranked melee and makes it take multiple clips from a hand gun to destroy the suit, making them more or less useless against the suit. Although a few shots from an anti-material rifle will take the suit down, it would take 1 man firing on full auto to severely damage the suit and force the user to retreat. The suit can now take explosive damage from hand grenades with only minimal damage. It would take 2 grenades to take it out. This also provides heat Resistance of anything that doesn't metal the metal, which has a boiling point of steel.
Complete heat resistance is shaky, seeing how this modification does so much already. But I suspect the actual body of the suit will be hot, the user inside will be safe from that heat?
As Chrony mentioned, the entire Machine Class is a huge WiP, so this is a beta trial approval. You're free to go out and RP, but will likely be brought back in for revisions. That is all.
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