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The Doctor
Good Men don't need rules. Today is not a Good Day to find out why I have so many.



The Biography


Birth Name:
No human has ever been able to pronounce it but go ahead and look:
Told ya.
Aliases: The Doctor, The Oncoming Storm, John Smith
Gender: Male
Age: 907
Birth Date: Unknown
Class: The Blessed/Damned

Appearance: This incarnation had long, dark hair which initially made him believe himself female. He confirmed that he wasn't by his Adam’s apple, but was annoyed his regeneration had not made him ginger as he wished to have been in his previous incarnation. He had a large chin, which his TARDIS found hilarious, and green eyes. His usual outfit is consisted of a plain brown tweed jacket with elbow patches, a dress shirt, a bow tie, braces, a gold wrist watch, rolled up navy-blue trousers and black boots. He would change the colour of his shirt, bow tie and braces from burgundy to blue.

Personality: Like all Gallifreyans, The Doctor can regenerate 13 times. Each time he regenerates, he takes on a slightly different personality, but in most aspects it stays the same. Even though he is unpredictable, and affable, the clownish exterior covers up a well of great age, wisdom, seriousness and even darkness. His enemies know him as the Oncoming Storm. He tends to ramble on, saying random facts that barely relates to the topic at hand, which usually helps them understand a problem better. He enjoys living life to the fullest. He is always the optimist, the follower of far flung hopes. He becomes attached to people and things, and feels that he has to help everyone and everything he mets.


The Capability


Rank:C

Specialties:

    Main: Leadership
    Sub: Professor: Quantum Physics



Powers:

    Main Power:Time Lord Physiology
    Externally, Gallifreyans were usually identical to humans, though they tended to have a mostly Eurasian appearance. Hair and eye colour were of any colour found among humans. Gallifreyans could survive falls (and probably many other physical stresses) which would shatter the bones of humans.They could also survive extreme heat. They could even survive the subzero temperatures and extremely low pressure of vacuum for around six minutes, as well as electric shocks that would be fatal to humans. Gallifreyans needed less sleep than humans, and could make do with as little as an hour. A severely-injured Gallifreyan would generally slip into a healing coma, and devote all his or her energy to healing the injury. While in the coma, they would appear to be dead. And last but certainly not least, Time Lords have Two hearts. More can be found here

    Main Power:Physic Power
    Some species were innately psychically active - in some cases it was very unusual for an individual of a given species not to manifest psi-powers. The Doctor has this Psi-powers, in which he can access a persons memories. He cannot like other control the person, nor would he want to, but can learn their thoughts and such. He usually doesn't use this power against a person's will.

    Sub Power: Unlocked at B rank

    Sub Power: Unlocked at A rank


Abilities:


    Name: Mind Breaching
    Rank: C
    Power: Physic Power
    Description:
    The Doctor can look into a unguarded mind, and walk among the memories, thoughts, dreams, and hopes it contains. This is a usually easy feat to accomplish if the mind is unguarded. When there are defenses however, it takes a decent amount of concentration. I shall expand on that point now. See if he were to try to break into you'r mind and you were ok with it or unaware it's relatively simple. But If you knew he was trying to get in and you didn't want him to, you could concentrate on say, a cat! Like really really Hard, he would have to get around your 'cat'. You see? Range- 10 feet.
    Time: 1 post undefended, 3 Defended.



    Name: Regeneration
    Rank: C - S
    Power: Time Lord Physiology
    Description:
    When the Doctor focuses after injury, he can heal his wounds at an accelerated rate that almost appears to be spontaneous. The amount of injury he can heal will be determined by his current experience (rank). At C rank the Doctor can heal light wounds, such as small stab, small bruises, scratches, and small bruises. At B rank, this allows the Doctor to regrow a single limb, while also being able to heal more heavy wounds such as medium sized bruises, broken fingers/toes, slashes that don't cause major gashes, and things of this nature. At A rank, two limbs can be regrown, plus heavy damage such as large gashes, broken bones, like arms/legs/rib, etc. At S rank the doctor can heal from any wound that is not lethal.


Skills:

    Name: Analyze
    Rank: C
    Specialty: Professor
    Description: When the Doctor see a piece of Alien tech he can Analyze it. He Smells, taste, feels, and/or licks said object. He can then know what it is.



Weapons/Devices:

Item Name:Psychic paper
Item Rank: C-A
Item Description: Blank, white card
Patent: Me
Item Image: N/A
Item Power: Usually, it showed what the holder of the paper wanted the person reading the paper to see. It is limited. For instance, if the Doctor were to use a really big lie, such as being a responsible adult, the Physic Paper would only produce wavy lines.

Item Name:Sonic Screwdriver
Item Rank: C-A
Item Description: See picture
Patent: Me
Item Image:
Spoiler:
Item Power: The Sonic Screwdriver has many function. As of right now, at C Rank, all it can do is unlock doors, and take vital signs. At Rank B it can be used to scan for alien tech. And last at rank A, it can access other devices remotely. The Sonic doesn't do wood. I can not open wooden locks, doors, etc. Also, if it has a dead lock seal sonic doesn't work. This is the Item bond to the Doctor due to him being in the Blessed class.



The Background


History:The Doctor's home planet, Gallifrey, was home to one of the wisest race, the universe has ever seen. The Time Lords. The Doctor explores the universe at random, using his extensive knowledge of science, technology and history to avert whatever crisis he encounters. The imprecise nature of his travels is initially attributed to the age and unreliability of the TARDIS's navigation system. The Doctor actually stole the TARDIS. Additionally, the TARDIS is meant to be piloted by six Timelords, rather than just one. He was presumably unfamiliar with its systems but was able to operate it correctly until his exile when the Time Lords wiped it from his memory. The Doctor initially had the manual for operating the TARDIS but destroyed it (by throwing it into a supernova) because he disagreed with it. After his trial and exile to twentieth century Earth, the Doctor still visits other planets on missions from the Time Lords who pilot the TARDIS to precise locations for him.

While Gallifrey was in the Time War, against the Dalek, the high consul of Gallifrey was extremely desperate for an end to the endless war. They being radical and decided that it was time for the people of the universe to leave their mortal shells, and become one with the universe it self. They began planing a massive bomb, that would take out all of reality. When The Doctor heard of their plan, he panicked. He creak a Time Lock, around the Dalek's home planet, Sako, and Gallifrey. Essentially the Time Lord and the Dalek, could not leave and died. The time bubble continued to play the last moments of the Time War, over and over again.

Feeling grief for his race, the Doctor sort of adopted the Earth. He protected it from aliens that intend to harm it's people. The Doctor like to take Human companions with him in his adventures. The TARDIS broke down, and was trapped on Earth. He is now in search of parts.

This is where our story end, and begins.




Quirks


  • Talking with his hands and calculated with gestures.
  • He spins in circles when walking if showing off or needing time to think
  • He rambles, making rapid amendments to his speech, sounding like he was talking nonsense.
  • Favorite food Fish Fingers and Custard.
  • Stetons, Fezes, Top Hats, and last ,but certainly not Extremely Very Bulky Cool, Bow Ties are cool.



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PostSubject: Re: The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED    The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED  EmptyFri Sep 21, 2012 9:25 pm

Spoiler:
Guarded by?.. what?.. like.. if i put a cat on my head.. am i guarded? Very Happy, please be a bit more specific here.

Spoiler:
Tone this down.. alot.. this is like the ultimate tracking ability of.. ultimateness.

Spoiler:
if you could turn the 48 hours into a post time? or if you can't use it inside of a topic.

Spoiler:
Taking vital signs? No problem, Unlocking doors? i don't think so, or limit it to each door unlocked at different ranks like.. a wooden door at C or something.

Spoiler:
Again, No, i don't think there is even a way to tone this down to be on a fair edge, get rid of it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED    The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED  EmptyFri Sep 21, 2012 9:36 pm

Xekiest wrote:
Spoiler:
Guarded by?.. what?.. like.. if i put a cat on my head.. am i guarded? Very Happy, please be a bit more specific here.

Spoiler:
Tone this down.. alot.. this is like the ultimate tracking ability of.. ultimateness.

Spoiler:
if you could turn the 48 hours into a post time? or if you can't use it inside of a topic.

Spoiler:
Taking vital signs? No problem, Unlocking doors? i don't think so, or limit it to each door unlocked at different ranks like.. a wooden door at C or something.

Spoiler:
Again, No, i don't think there is even a way to tone this down to be on a fair edge, get rid of it.

1) Lol you have a point there. I shall expand on that point now. See if he were to try to break into you'r mind and you were ok with it or unaware it's relatively simple. But If you knew he was trying to get in and you didn't want him to, you could concentrate on say, a cat! Like really really Hard, he would have to get around your 'cat'. You see?

2)Ok! Will do in a second.

3)Um say after 10 of my post? 20 total?

4)Ah, thank you. I thought I was missing something. The Sonic doesn't do wood. I can not open wooden locks, doors, etc. Also, if it has a dead lock seal sonic doesn't work.

5)Maybe cut it down to just 'showed what the holder of the paper wanted the person reading the paper to see' ?
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PostSubject: Re: The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED    The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED  EmptyFri Sep 21, 2012 9:46 pm

Your specialities need to follow our guide.

https://marvelunlimited.forumotion.com/t10-specialties
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PostSubject: Re: The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED    The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED  EmptyFri Sep 21, 2012 9:48 pm

Ms. Flash wrote:
Your specialities need to follow our guide.

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PostSubject: Re: The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED    The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED  EmptyFri Sep 21, 2012 10:19 pm

The Doctor wrote:
Xekiest wrote:
Spoiler:
Guarded by?.. what?.. like.. if i put a cat on my head.. am i guarded? Very Happy, please be a bit more specific here.

Spoiler:
Tone this down.. alot.. this is like the ultimate tracking ability of.. ultimateness.

Spoiler:
if you could turn the 48 hours into a post time? or if you can't use it inside of a topic.

Spoiler:
Taking vital signs? No problem, Unlocking doors? i don't think so, or limit it to each door unlocked at different ranks like.. a wooden door at C or something.

Spoiler:
Again, No, i don't think there is even a way to tone this down to be on a fair edge, get rid of it.

1) Lol you have a point there. I shall expand on that point now. See if he were to try to break into you'r mind and you were ok with it or unaware it's relatively simple. But If you knew he was trying to get in and you didn't want him to, you could concentrate on say, a cat! Like really really Hard, he would have to get around your 'cat'. You see?

2)Ok! Will do in a second.

3)Um say after 10 of my post? 20 total?

4)Ah, thank you. I thought I was missing something. The Sonic doesn't do wood. I can not open wooden locks, doors, etc. Also, if it has a dead lock seal sonic doesn't work.

5)Maybe cut it down to just 'showed what the holder of the paper wanted the person reading the paper to see' ?

1) Ah.. kinda like.. Eragon O_o

2) Awesome

3) 10 = 48 hours? eh.. more, and can he regenerate limbs?

4) Mmk, just make sure it isn't like every door forever! muwhahaha, just tone it down to what kind of door per rank

5) still seems OP for a C rank



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PostSubject: Re: The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED    The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED  EmptyFri Sep 21, 2012 10:23 pm

1) ah there's a book I need to re-read.
3) I edited it to 20
4) Lol Ok sounds good
5) It is limited. For instance, if the Doctor were to use a really big lie, such as being a responsible adult, the Physic Paper would only produce wavy lines.
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—Name: Mind Probe
—Rank: C
—Power: Time Lord Physiology
—Description: The Doctor can look into a unguarded mind, and walk among the memories, thoughts, dreams, and hopes it contains. This is a usually easy feat to accomplish if the mind is unguarded. When there are defenses however, it takes a decent amount of concentration. I shall expand on that point now. See if he were to try to break into you'r mind and you were ok with it or unaware it's relatively simple. But If you knew he was trying to get in and you didn't want him to, you could concentrate on say, a cat! Like really really Hard, he would have to get around your 'cat'. You see?

Alright, is there a post count it'll take you to infiltrate their mind? Also is there any sort of range you have to be from a person to do this, or just eyesight?
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Range- 10 feet.
1 post undefended, 3 Defended
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PostSubject: Re: The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED    The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED  EmptySat Sep 22, 2012 3:56 pm

Place it in the description. Also can you link or write out the description of your powers so we know what it entails. Everything else looks fine though. Unless you had to change something for another mod.
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PostSubject: Re: The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED    The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED  EmptySat Sep 22, 2012 4:03 pm

I think Ms. Flash was just going to say the same thing as you did. I added a link for regeneration.
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PostSubject: Re: The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED    The Doctor FINALLY FINISHED  EmptySat Sep 22, 2012 4:07 pm

—Sub Power: Regeneration
—Sub Power: Mind Probe

You get these later when you rank up

Read the rules
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I believe I have fixed it now blaine. Sorry yet again for being a pain in the ass
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