[Ryan D. glasglow.] [RyanD] - [Shield]
[Mischeif] [Mocking Bird] -[Suicide Corps]
[Micheal Thompson] [The unknowable harlem] [SHIELD]
NPC
Next time get everyone's full name. It becomes a pain to do this if the template isn't followed exactly.
Length: 4
English:
[Ryan D. glasglow.] [RyanD] - [Shield] - 5
[Mischeif] [Mocking Bird] -[Suicide Corps] - 5
[Micheal Thompson] [The unknowable harlem] [SHIELD] - 5
NPC - 5
Quality of Story: 3 The amount of fail..was..wow
Quality of Writing:
[Ryan D. glasglow.] [RyanD] - [Shield] - 8
[Mischeif] [Mocking Bird] -[Suicide Corps] - 10 [He saved the entire mission]
[Micheal Thompson] [The unknowable harlem] [SHIELD] - 7
NPC - 7
Faction:
SHIELD - 7
Suicide - 5
Total:
[Ryan D. glasglow.] [RyanD] - [Shield] 20 + 30 = 50
[Mischeif] [Mocking Bird] -[Suicide Corps] 22 + 30 = 52
[Micheal Thompson] [The unknowable harlem] [SHIELD] 19
NPC - 19 + 15 for NPC = 34