Foxtrot Uniform Charlie Kilo

Topic Name:Jailbait;)
Topic Link: NPC and Stuffles
Topic Participants:

Emelie Romskaug Lukas 2

NPC- Tara Strong - Flash


Topic Description: Foxtrot Uniform Charlie Kilo

Emelie Romskaug Lukas 2
NPC- Tara Strong - Flash -

Length: 3

English:

Emelie Romskaug Lukas 2 - 5
NPC- Tara Strong - Flash - 5

Quality of Story: 5 Plot brewing and people getting locked up. Not bad.

Quality of Writing:

Emelie Romskaug Lukas 2 - 9 It takes two to have a conversation and the egging on to get extra information earned you a few points. Towards the end, you started going abit crazy, like saying a cell designed to hold supers had a random design flaw that would allow you to kick into the wiring. I dunno, it brought down some quality of the post though. Other then that, the content of the posts were lacking, but no one can really blame you since you're in a prison. Not much you can do in that situation without trying to add some fluff.

NPC- Tara Strong - Flash - 11 Now here's the reason why I gave you an 11. Each post you knocked it out with consistency in character while bringing development too. Every post I read, it felt like it was revealing alittle more and more about the "Green Haired Man" while leaving abit of mystery aswell. If anyone disagrees with me on this, feel free to point it out.

Faction: N/A

Total:

Emelie Romskaug Lukas 2 - 22
NPC- Tara Strong - Flash - 24

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