Length: 5
English:
Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 5
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 5
Morino Ray [Soviet Jesus] - [The Collective] - 5
Pacino(NPC) [Nol] - 5
Quality of Story: 3 Nol added some good stuff with the whole Frankenstein thing
Quality of Writing:
Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 9 It was extremely difficult to place you somewhere when grading this. You came in strong into the topic with the first post, and then each post after you started slipping off more and more till finally poof.
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 10 [i]Though not one of my best efforts, I did keep up consistency on my posts and kept the wheels rolling on the mission. No dragging things out and leaving things unturned. Only reason it came up to ten, plus effort in the mission aswell.
Morino Ray [Soviet Jesus] - [The Collective] - 8 It got to the point of reading some posts that seemed like filler. Sitting back and watching, though strategic, hurts the consistency of posts.
Pacino(NPC) [Nol] - 11 [i]You were very consistent and added in extra detail that wasn't needed to the mission. I think it was a nice add, and you kept up the pace till the end.
Faction: The Order - 5 The Collective - 10
Total:
Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 22 + 30 = 52
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 23 + 30 = 53
Morino Ray [Soviet Jesus] - [The Collective] - 21 + 30 = 51
Pacino(NPC) [Nol] - 24 + 15 = 39