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Senator Hines has revealed how mutants will be handled: Sentinels.

A rumor traveled the circles of the supernatural. Mutants heard a safe, underground railroad was being started, inquire at the Summit. The beyond sought the strange power said to rest at the Summit of New York City. The gossip flitted amongst the rest: valuable information was to come to light when dawn broke over the Summit.
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PostSubject: Dirty Works [Prestige]   Sat Oct 06, 2012 1:30 pm

b]Topic Name:[/b] Dirty Works (Mission)
Topic Link: Dat Dirty Works
Topic Participants:

Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective]
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order]
Morino Ray [Soviet Jesus] - [The Collective]
Pacino(NPC) [Nol]


Topic Description: So a Zombie, A clown, A symbiote and a Werewolf walk into a bar....
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Works [Prestige]   Mon Oct 08, 2012 9:09 pm

Length: 5
English:

Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 5
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 5
Morino Ray [Soviet Jesus] - [The Collective] - 5
Pacino(NPC) [Nol] - 5


Quality of Story: 3 Nol added some good stuff with the whole Frankenstein thing

Quality of Writing:

Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 9 It was extremely difficult to place you somewhere when grading this. You came in strong into the topic with the first post, and then each post after you started slipping off more and more till finally poof.

Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 10 [i]Though not one of my best efforts, I did keep up consistency on my posts and kept the wheels rolling on the mission. No dragging things out and leaving things unturned. Only reason it came up to ten, plus effort in the mission aswell.


Morino Ray [Soviet Jesus] - [The Collective] - 8 It got to the point of reading some posts that seemed like filler. Sitting back and watching, though strategic, hurts the consistency of posts.

Pacino(NPC) [Nol] - 11 [i]You were very consistent and added in extra detail that wasn't needed to the mission. I think it was a nice add, and you kept up the pace till the end.


Faction: The Order - 5 The Collective - 10

Total:

Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 22 + 30 = 52
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 23 + 30 = 53
Morino Ray [Soviet Jesus] - [The Collective] - 21 + 30 = 51
Pacino(NPC) [Nol] - 24 + 15 = 39
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Works [Prestige]   Mon Oct 08, 2012 9:15 pm

Updated everyone but Nol. Nol, where do you want the prestige?
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Works [Prestige]   Mon Oct 08, 2012 10:58 pm

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