Just a day among many (Prestige)

Posts : 33 Join date : 2012-08-30

Topic Name: Just a day among many (Open)
Topic Link: Just a day among many
Topic Participants:

Ari Armello as Ari Armello (No faction)

Blaine as Ray Morino (The corporation)

Topic Description: Ari goes to get a slurpee places starts to get robbed, Ray/Hiim comes in distracts them for a moment then Ari beats two up but third points gun at him, Hiim saves Ari and they leave together.

Posts : 105 Join date : 2012-08-31

Ari Armello as Ari Armello (No faction)

Blaine as Ray Morino (The corporation)
Length: 3
English:

Ari Armello as Ari Armello (No faction) - 5

Blaine as Ray Morino (The corporation) - 5
Quality of Story: 4 (7/11 Robbery gone wrong! For the robbers at least.)

Quality of Writing:
Ari Armello as Ari Armello (No faction) -9

Blaine as Ray Morino (The corporation)- 7

Faction: [Anarchs]- 2

Total:

Ari Armello as Ari Armello (No faction)- 21

Blaine as Ray Morino (The corporation)- 19

Posts : 105 Join date : 2012-08-31

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