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Senator Hines has revealed how mutants will be handled: Sentinels.
A rumor traveled the circles of the supernatural. Mutants heard a safe, underground railroad was being started, inquire at the Summit. The beyond sought the strange power said to rest at the Summit of New York City. The gossip flitted amongst the rest: valuable information was to come to light when dawn broke over the Summit.
Subject: Raishin, Vampire Lord Sat Aug 11, 2012 12:24 am
Raishin
The world could only confine me for so long!
The Biography
Birth Name: Ga Aliases: Raishin Gender: Male Age: 5595 Birth Date: Feb 15 Class: Deity Touched
Appearance: Raishin is a tall man that screams royalty, but it is a strange combination, as if he is the king of battle. He is tall, very pale, but incredibly handsome. He is manly, having a fairly muscular build, standing at 6 foot 2 inches, and weighing in at around 185 pounds. Starting at the top of his head, his hair is very long, going down to about his mid back, and is a pale white color. It is very taken care of, shining in the light, has bounce to it, etc. The hair itself is styled, brushed and combed to one side, but as it falls to his shoulders, the hair grows very wild, the hair curling and what not in different directions, making the hair as if it came from a beast or a monster, rather than a man. His eyes are deep inset and sinister, the shadows his brow makes adding to his frightening appearance. His eyes themselves are a deep blood red, that seem to glow in darkness. He also has a wide grin, and his teeth are brilliantly white, but you can clearly see his razor sharp canine teeth. As said before, his body appears manly. He has very broad shoulders, which show muscularity to them, the same with his abdomen and legs. His arms are also rather toned, but they aren't extremely muscular as one would expect. His hands are the most non-manly thing about his body, as they are soft and delicate, but that's mostly a charade when wanting to be an aristocrat, one needs to be elegant.
The clothing he wears is very wealthy looking, a large bordered coat, with a ruffled shirt and a ruffled cloth hanging from the neck. The shirt and cloth are bright white while the long coat is a dark blood red on the outside, the inside material is a brighter red. Raishin also wears a cape, that flows down his back, and appears to be ripped in some spots, which makes it resemble bat wings. The coat is completely open, and has pockets on the inside to hold watches. A gold chain keeps it attached to both sides, to keep it from falling off when moving. A smaller red and gold very is worn over the shirt and under the coat for added wealth appearance. The cape itself is all black. He wears dark brown pants that have no pockets, and look as though they are silk. He then wears fancy boots bordered with gold plated steel.
Personality: Raishin is an extremely talented and brilliant person, and he knows it. He can learn things incredibly quickly, and is incredibly ruthless. He can be attributed to being insane, but it is more than that. He often describes himself as his mind is simply more advanced for his brain, and this the speed of it and his brilliance can not be contained. He is extremely cunning, ruthless, and sadistic. He gets great pleasure from watching people squirm, before he rends them asunder, drain them completely of their blood, or rip their mind to shreds. People will break under his will, and he enjoys every second of it. He often likes to change his appearance, as he likes to stay fashionable with the times. He enjoys flaunting his physical appearance, as he thinks himself very attractive, although he is rather pale and skinny. He has extreme confidence in himself, and this bleeds into almost everything he does. He will stroll up to people, things, with an air of supremacy.
He is a bit of an extremist, in love with the theatrical and the cinematic. He enjoys when someone is walking away casually with an explosion in the background, and also loves a dramatic twist. He views everything as a movie of sorts, even though he doesn't quite know what they are. Everything new awes him, but only on the inside. He will simply non-nonchalantly brush off what he doesn't care about, or even things he enjoys, but he doesn't want to seem like he doesn't know how something works. He is a strange villain, as he might develop relationships with someone, even go so far as protecting them, but he will still feed on them and treat them as if they are his property.
—Main Power: Blood Manipulation —Main Power: Vampirism —Sub Power:(Leave Blank Until B-Level) —Sub Power:(Leave Blank Until A-Level)
Abilities:
Vampirism:
[list]Name: Hypnotic Eyes Rank: C+ Power: Vampirism Description: Powerful vampires have the ability to hypnotize others, controlling them slightly for a certain use. This ability uses the user's eyes, and while the ability is in use, the victim can not draw their eyes away from the user's. The user can suggest for them to do something through eye contact alone, and the victim will find it almost impossible not to do it. The victim can still move around and such, but they will be forced to do the action. The victim will resist if the suggestion would cause harm to themselves or their allies, and the power will also be cut off if something interrupts eye contact. Mental abilities meant to break or block mental techniques can also break the ability. Can not be used on the same target for 2 posts.
Name: Vampiric Conversion Rank: C+ Power: Vampirism Description: Vampires can choose, when they bite someone, to spread their powers to others. The powers are a much weakened version of the user's own vampiric powers, and the new vampire must train the abilities if they want them. Not being natural born vampires means that they are limited in the abilities they can get. NPCs effected by the conversion have lesser minds, and easily succumb to the will of the original vampire, meaning that they can be controlled by him and follow his every command. The victim instantly gains a weakness to the sun, with direct sunlight greatly harming their body, and prolonged exposure(3 posts) or intense sunlight will destroy their body. The list of vampiric abilities are as follows: Enhanced Strength (no more than 500 lbs) Enhanced Speed (no more than 25 mph) Enhanced Regeneration (half the rank's branch value) Enhanced Reflexes Blood Drinking Night Vision
Name: Enhanced Charisma Rank: C+ Power: Vampirism Description: Powerful vampires have an incredible charm to them, and are very convincing in their words. They seem to attract the opposite sex with ease, as well as make the same sex envious, but at the same time awed by them. The user has a natural ability to charm people, meaning he can usually talk his way out of or into certain situations if he wants to. He seems to give off a sense of confidence, and it seems that people will naturally be drawn to him in a good way.
Name: Blood Drinking Rank: C Power: Vampirism Description: The user can bite into someone, draining a significant amount of blood from them. The blood drank increases the powers of the user, making them much stronger than normal. This gives the user a 20% increase in all stats, as well as draining a pint of blood from the victim per post. The bonus is gained per post the user drains successfully, and the boost lasts for 3 posts. If the user drains again, it gives them another 20% boost, and the timer is reset. This skill only gives boosts from drinking blood that is saturated with energy, meaning npcs won't give the bonus.
Name: Enhanced Strength Rank: C+ Power: Vampirism Description: The user's vampirism makes him a lot stronger than the weaker humans around him, and even faster than a lot of the other supers. This skill allows him to lift 1000 more pounds than normal, and his strikes can break through stone rather easily.
Name: Enhanced Speed Rank: C+ Power: Vampirism Description: The user's vampirism makes him a lot faster than humans, and even other supers. This allows him to move 50 mph faster than normal.
Name: Enhanced Agility Rank: C+ Power: Vampirism Description: The user's vampirism grants him increased agility, allowing him to perform acrobatic, martial, and gymnastic moves with little effort. This allows him to be very slippery, able to dodge attacks better than others, and every movement flows seamlessly into the next.
Name: Enhanced Combat Rank: C+ Power: Vampirism Description: The user is able to become skilled in most forms of fighting traditions from various cultures, and become advanced in their individual methods of close combat, including martial arts, boxing, and wrestling. This allows the user to have advanced fighting prowess without the need for long-term or special training.
Name: Enhanced Senses Rank: C+ Power: Vampirism Description: The user has 3 of their senses empowered quite a bit, including sight, smell, and hearing. This allows the user to smell something from 30m away, and locate it's location, to see everything very clearly and from double the distance of normal, and pick up every single sound around them, and can decipher layer upon layer of sounds.
Name: Night Vision Rank: D Power: Vampirism Description: The user's vision is increased in the darkness, allowing them to see perfectly, as if it was a well lit area.
Name: Hypnotic Eyes Rank: D Power: Vampirism Description: Powerful vampires have the ability to walk around during the day, and in the sunlight, with very little hindrance to their self. If in direct and intense sunlight, the user will feel exhausted, and start to exert more energy if doing strenuous tasks.
Blood Manipulation:
Name: Blood Projectiles Rank: C+ Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The user manipulates their own blood, replicating enough blood to make up to 10 projectiles per rank, per use of this skill, shoot out of an open wound that the user has. The projectiles can be spikes, blades, hooks, or anything that the user can think of, but if the projectiles are large, then they can only make 2 per rank. These projectiles are made out of dense and pressurized blood, making it highly effective vs matter, while less effective during energy. The projectiles travel at 70 mph at C ranked.
Name: Blood Bucket Rank: C+ Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The user manipulates their own blood, replicating their blood constantly, allowing them to never run out of blood. This protects highly against blood loss, but the real power of this skill, is that the user can rapidly increase their blood replication, allowing them to spew out hundreds of gallons of their own blood for manipulation purposes. The blood is spewed out of the mouth, or can be launched out of an open wound. The amount of blood depends on rank, and it can be directed as a wave to smash into people if wanted. C Ranked - 350 gallons of blood (~47 cubic feet) - 3 post cooldown
Name: General Blood Manipulation Rank: C+ Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The basic ability that allows the user to manipulate their own blood. Similar to manipulating water, the user can form whips, hands, etc out of the blood around them or in their bodies, and attack people, hold them in place, or any number of other things. This is simply for manipulating the liquid blood, but the blood can be manipulated with great power, able to lift 1200 lbs with blood alone, which also dictates the power of whatever forms the blood takes. C ranked - 250 gallons can be manipulated at one time (~33 cubic feet)
Name: Blood Armor Rank: C+ Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The user manipulates their own blood, covering their body in it, and then solidifying it, changing it's structure so that it forms crystals, making it much harder and stronger than normal pressurized blood. This armor is about as strong as iron, but can easily reform when damaged, as it is still the user's blood. The user can cause weapons, spikes, and other such constructs to shoot off of the armor, as long as it stays connected to the user physically. The armor can only be manipulated 3 feet from the user.
Name: Crystallization Rank: C Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The user targets any amount of their own blood, and can instantly crystallize it. These crystals are special, in that they repel any other blood that isn't the user's. This can be an effective way to repel unwanted visitors and such, as the crystals act as a magnet, repelling them forcefully unless they have an incredible amount of strength. The force isn't great, but steady, and only pushes targets away 5 feet.
Name: Blood Crystal Manipulation Rank: C+ Power: Blood Manipulation Description: When the user crystallizes blood, he an then manipulate it freely, forming weapons out of it, walls, defenses, or other constructs out of it. The user has a range that they can manipulate the crystals, which depends on rank. C ranked - 20 meters
Name: Blood Puppetry Rank: C+ Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The user must get a sample of a target's blood, and then they can manipulate the blood in their body, to control the opponent's body using their blood. This is simply motor functions, but it is very hard to fight unless the victim has an advanced or powerful will. Those with weak wills are fully controllable, such as animals and weak humans. Supers without a powerful will can be slightly controlled, while people with powerful wills are basically unaffected. C Ranked - 2 weak or 1 strong target at a time. Can only cause supers to form common and small movements, such as moving slightly to the left, letting go of something, or the like.
Name: Blood Possession Rank: C+ Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The user must get a sample of a target's blood, and then they can manipulate the blood in their body, to control the opponent's body using their blood. This forces the target to copy the user's movements exactly, making this a good ability to simply stop the opponent, as the user needs to simply stand still. At C ranked, the user must concentrate solely on the possession, meaning they can only do this ability. If their concentration breaks, the ability will be released. Once this ability ends, the user must get another sample of the target's blood to perform it again.
Name: Bloody Drain Rank: C+ Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The user must first damage the user in a way to cause a wound on their body, that will leak blood. The user can then simply drain blood out of the wound at a rate dependent on rank. The blood can then be trated as the user's blood for any blood technique, as it is technically stolen. The user can't use this ability twice on the same target in a topic. Also, if the target escapes the range, the technique is broken early. C Ranked - 1/2 pint per post(human body holds 8 1/2 pints of blood on average) 5 meter range
Name: Purge Rank: C Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The user can tell when anything is affecting their blood, making it easy to tell if they have been poisoned. They can then simply expel the poison blood out of their body, fixing themselves, preventing the poison from doing any real damage from being done by the poison. The user can then use the poisoned blood in other abilities, and could even possibly poison other with it. The poison in the blood rapidly gets diluted, meaning carrying poison over topics isn't possible.
Skills:
—Name:Blood Sense —Specialty: Projection —Rank: C+ —Description: The user being a vampire and having blood manipulation, has the ability to sense large concentrations of blood, which allows them to sense the hearts of living things, as long as they have blood in them. The user can also "see" the hearts and the main veins the blood travel through. The mind forms what a heart looks like according to the sound it beat it makes, and the user can see it by sensing where it is. The way the user sees the heart may not be what it actually looks like, of course. By studying the heartbeat, one can lock on to a specific beat, allowing them to track a specific person or always know where they are, within range of course. C ranked range is 20 meters.
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The Background
History:
Previous Life Birth Arc: Raishin was once a human born far in ancient Egypt. When he was born, it seemed that the time was ripe for building, and he was going to be raised as a slave, so he wasn't quite in the best of shape as a child. He was still treated well, as most slaves were kept in good housing, and even paid for their actions, although he was sickly. He was a beautiful looking child however, although he was constantly crying as he was scared. He was scared of everything and anything new, and was even afraid of his mother for a few months, until he got used to his parents. It took him a lot longer than most to get used to things, and he definitely was afraid of everything, even his food and the primitive medicine that was given to him. He wouldn't get better because he would refuse to eat the healthy berries and other potions his parents saved all of their money for. Because of this fear, a deity grew fond of him, and simply watched him be fleshed out as a child.
Previous Life Slave Arc: Once Ga came of age, he was quickly placed into the slave business, and was instantly branded as useless, and thus he was placed with the lesser tasks, such as shoveling, instead of pulling rocks up large slopes. He stayed away from people, and although he was constantly afraid of everything, he was extremely good at his job. He was very strong and determined for being a sickly child, but the slave work made his body very tough. He was incredibly afraid of the task masters that would whip the people for not doing things as fast or as well as they could. This made him do things extremely fast, efficient, and made him strong quickly, even though his body build didn't show it. The Pharaoh himself thought to change him to the normal slave work, and although it didn't seem like much, it was still an honorable mention to someone the people almost worshiped.
Previous Life Death Arc: After climbing the slave ladder, if that was even possible, Ga found himself at the Pharaoh's side, being a personal servant to him. He did the whole, feed grapes and etc. He was also secretly trained to be a personal fighter for the Pharaoh, as he was incredibly good at becoming very strong very quickly, for some reason. He had a special energy, which attracted the deity to him in the first place, and that energy made him able to win fights quite easily. But, the crushing fear made him thirst for power. He wanted to not be afraid of anything, and only ultimate power would allow him to do that. The deity saw this as a sign of weakness, and it allowed him to enter Ga to cause the world chaos. However, Ga's crushing fear and borderline insanity forced the deity's mind out of him, and he simply kept the energy. He started killing those around him, and the Pharaoh couldn't be happier with his performance. However, the time came when the Pharaoh would die, and his will was that his servants be buried alive with him.
Slumber Arc: The Pharaoh got the ceremonial mummification process, that removed all the vital organs, and then placed him in the tomb. However, the servants were simply wrapped up and tossed in with him, and the overwhelming fear Ga would experience forced him to beg and plead for the deity's help. The deity wouldn't come for him however, until after he had died. Ga died, cold, alone, and in a small box hundreds of feet into the earth, terrified, and insane. The claw marks all over the room he was in would be testament to that. His soul, however, was stuck within the tomb, the ceremony actually harnessing slight supernatural energy to it. The deity would come, and grip the soul, pulling back the mind of Ga from the past. The deity asked if he would become an Avatar, or the physical embodiment of the deity, who existed outside of space and time. Ga hastily agreed, as long as he was freed from his overwhelming fear. This was granted, and instead of fear, insanity was put it it's place. The deity poured his powers into the young man, granting him an entire new body with which to use, and the soul was anchored to it as if he was born again.
Ga was reborn as Raishin, which meant spiritual double, which is what he was to the deity. However, Raishin was stuck inside of the tomb still, and simply waited, musing over the universe. His insanity kept him from going insane... or wait... the flow of time simply went without notice, as he drifted into his mind's oblivion. He simply waited, as he was basically sealed into the tomb. One day, someone would open the door, and unleash true terror upon the world.
Last edited by Akuma on Sun Aug 12, 2012 12:06 am; edited 3 times in total
Akuma
Posts : 85 Join date : 2012-05-28
Subject: Re: Raishin, Vampire Lord Sat Aug 11, 2012 4:00 pm
link to old app to confirm the number of abilities being replaced
Subject: Re: Raishin, Vampire Lord Sat Aug 11, 2012 4:34 pm
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Name: Enhanced Combat Rank: C+ Power: Vampirism Description: The user is able to become skilled in most forms of fighting traditions from various cultures, and become advanced in their individual methods of close combat, including martial arts, boxing, and wrestling. This allows the user to have advanced fighting prowess without the need for long-term or special training.
How does intuitively knowing combat skills related to either of your powers?
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Name: Blood Bucket Rank: C+ Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The user manipulates their own blood, replicating their blood constantly, allowing them to never run out of blood. This protects highly against blood loss, but the real power of this skill, is that the user can rapidly increase their blood replication, allowing them to spew out hundreds of gallons of their own blood for manipulation purposes. The blood is spewed out of the mouth, or can be launched out of an open wound. The amount of blood depends on rank, and it can be directed as a wave to smash into people if wanted. C Ranked - 500 gallons of blood (~66 cubic feet)
Tone that down a touch
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Name: Crystallization Rank: C Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The user targets any amount of their own blood, and can instantly crystallize it. These crystals are special, in that they repel any other blood that isn't the user's. This can be an effective way to repel unwanted visitors and such, as the crystals act as a magnet, repelling them forcefully unless they have an incredible amount of strength.
Needs a repulsion distance and a limited number. Otherwise you could just endlessly repulse people given the amount of blood you can create.
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Name: Purge Rank: C Power: Blood Manipulation Description: The user can tell when anything is affecting their blood, making it easy to tell if they have been poisoned. They can then simply expel the poison blood out of their body, fixing themselves, preventing the poison from doing any real damage from being done by the poison. The user can then use the poisoned blood in other abilities, and could even possibly poison other with it.
This needs to be restricted to a single topic.
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—Name:Heartbeat Sense —Specialty: Projection —Rank: C+ —Description: The user being a vampire, has the ability to sense and see the heartbeats of living things. By studying the heartbeat, one can lock on to a specific beat, allowing them to track a specific person or always know where they are, within range of course. C ranked range is 20 meters.
How can you "See" the heartbeat without x-ray vision or any form of sonar?
Akuma
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Subject: Re: Raishin, Vampire Lord Sat Aug 11, 2012 9:26 pm
I went with the wiki we frequently use here, and it said that enhanced combat comes with vampirism, and vampires are usually hyper advanced physical combatants. I can remove if you want though.
Blood Bucket toned down
Crystallization was toned down to a 5 foot range, and the repulsion isn't heavy, so can't really injure anyone, simply keep them away from a wall that they can destroy while being at range.
Put on Purge that I can't keep the poison through topics
Heartbeat Sense was slightly changed. The powers combining to form a sort of "sixth sense" when it comes to blood, the heart being focused on because of the concentration of blood constantly flowing through it.
The Superior Spider
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Subject: Re: Raishin, Vampire Lord Sat Aug 11, 2012 11:58 pm
Being able to constantly use Blood Bucket seems abit much. Add a post cool down or decrease the amount of blood you spew some more.
Akuma
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Subject: Re: Raishin, Vampire Lord Sun Aug 12, 2012 12:07 am
sorry, it was supposed to have a cooldown already, missed that, thanks.
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The Superior Spider
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Subject: Re: Raishin, Vampire Lord Sun Aug 12, 2012 12:08 am
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