Something Wicked This Way Comes [Prestige]

Topic Name: Something Wicked This Way Comes
Topic Link: Something Wicked This Way Comes
Topic Participants:

Devon Hadden [TheTempest] - [Mutants]
Samael Smith [Samael] - [Deity Touched]

Topic Description: Samael stalks a coed at GWU, finding a rapist and demands his confession. Devon stumbles upon the scene, thinking it at first a violent confrontation. A confrontation of moral and ethical implications ensues as emotions come to bare.

Bumping.

Length: 2
English: 5
Quality of Story: 2
Quality of Writing:
Tempest 8
Samael 9
Faction: 0

Devon Hadden [TheTempest] - 17
Samael Smith [Samael] - 18

Bro Mutants touched and such aren't a Faction, A faction would be like H.A.M.M.E.R. or a group you joined.

added

Can I have more detail on the grading for each aspect? I've read the Guide, but I'm unclear as to the judging criteria. Specifically, I feel like this isn't enough. I'll also admit to feeling I'm better than these gradings.

Of note are the following:

Length

Something Wicked was longer than Today's Forecast but received less for length.

Quality of Story

I expected more for quality of story considering the implications of the confrontation, at least more than what Today's Forecast got yet they both got 2 out of 15.

Quality of Writing

Here I have great concern.

Guidelines: "Quality of Writing: This was the quality of writing. Our angry villain, Mr. Bald put up a sad show, his alter ego/secret identity only wrote a small paragraph each go around, so Mr. Bald only gained 7/20 Writing prestige. meanwhile, Captain Hygienes secret identity type person, wrote 5 or 6 detailed paragraphs on average, and made a nice hefty 17 out of 20 Max."

I would like to know the basis of my 8, especially if 7 is "only wrote a small paragraph" where 17 is "wrote 5 or 6 detailed paragraphs on average."

Conclusion

Either I'm way off or the guidelines need revamping. Either way I would be very appreciative of a more detailed response if only to 1) soothe my ego and 2) get constructive criticism.

Thank you.

Length: 7
English: 5
Quality of Story: 4
Quality of Writing:
Tempest 11
Samael 10
Faction: 0

Devon Hadden [TheTempest] - 17 to 27
Samael Smith [Samael] - 18 to 26

added 9 to Sam and 10 to Devon