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PostSubject: Usurping Mamluk   Mon Sep 10, 2012 8:41 pm


Character Name Here
Within the masses, your assuring safety will root your fear.


The Biography


Birth Name: Duval Sumat.
Aliases: The Mamluk.
Gender: Man.
Age: 26.
Class: Dammed.

Appearance:
The Mamluk stands at 1.8 meters, but makes up for it in sheer bearing alone. His face is too narrow about the chin to have the classical and dangerously sharp features, although he remedies this by the clipping of a curly afro to a decent chin length. Duval looks as if he has something to hide, though much people would not know. Close enough such an assumption may be, but the expression in Duval's eyes in one, which few would match to a normal warlord. If it were not for the fact that he laughs so much, or possibly even despite it, one could imagine him to be enraged by how intense his gaze can be once attracted to a subject, and by just how much it demands to be granted anything and everything on the spot.


Personality:
Mamluk also has a noted lack of patience, expecting other people to at least be enrolled in whichever task they claim to be intent on. Those who will not either admit to having no interest or no purpose in being involved with a subject are only wastes of time. When the necromancer has a more relaxed schedule, he does not mind being diverted, but when he is fixed upon a task he demands for it to be completed and to the flames can be resigned any who do not intend to help or get out of his way. Because of this, many can be put off by Mamluk's mannerisms, which swing from utterly playful to ruthlessly in demand for them to perform appropriately. His life in complete disarray, he follows his own.

Mamluk also enjoys amused whining and being utterly off balance in his approach to others. At heart, he knows that he would rather be seen in thrall to a baker's cart than actually resist fulfilling one of his plans due to mere complaints, but it's far too entertaining to watch other people react. For a man with such a sense of pride, he gives up a surprising amount in just how silly he can get incomprehensible to all save those who see just how sensitive he can get when his intellectual capacities, the true root of his vanity, are mocked and assumed lacking.


The Capability


Rank: C

Specialties:

    Main Specialty: Projection
    Sub Specialty: Hunter


Powers:

    Main Power: Chi Containment: After bonding with the deity summoned, the surplus of energy embodied within the creature is contained and preserved within Mamluk. The energy evil within nature is curruptible, though through Mamluik's own will power and perseverance he is able to overcome such an overbearing influence on his mind and is able to exist with the being inside of him.

    Main Power: Chi Leak: As the abundance of energy lies within him, he can project the energy around him to ascertain certain effects on his opponents or himself augmented through certain abilities and applications. The range of abilities and effects that result from the leaking is divided within the abilities.

    Sub Power:(Leave Blank Until B-Level)
    Sub Power:(Leave Blank Until A-Level)



Abilities:

    Name: Samarran Flow
    Rank: C
    Power: Chi Containment
    Description: Due to the immense energy compressed into the being of The Mamluk, as he fights he releases such energy through his body discreetly, though under his complete control. This projection releases itself as ethereal water.



    Name: Basasiri Intellect
    Rank:C
    Power: Chi Leak
    Description: The abundance of energy within the individual can spread out up to 25 meters on command, to where Mamluk's senses are entwined with such energy, detecting differentiated energies within field due to its opposing nature of his own.


Skills:

    Name: Kolemen Empowerment
    Specialty: Projection
    Rank: D
    Description: From his own mastery and application, the increased powers from his abilities has granted the individual with increased brain functions, making the Mamluk an longsighted intellect in terms of battle potential and observation.



    Name: Tulun Temperment
    Specialty: Physical Prowess
    Rank: D
    Description: From multiple years of training and self-presevation, Mamluk has honed his body and reflexes to a fine point, where he is able to react quicker and process the progression of battle a higher pace where prediction and understanding of his opponents abilities is safely within his grasp.


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The Background


History:

Knowledge is limitless. Facts that ascertain the fate of the present can always be determined with a little foresight, or that how Mamluk always seemed to see things. Born in the country which would be considered anything but lavish, his mother gave birth in the west of some sort of twisted Assyrian slave camp, deep within the region of a critically third world country. Around him he felt utterly complacent with his situation, although he knew of the outside world, he had absolutely no means to attain such a state. Though such things would change when he stowed upon a boat of the S.H.E.I.L.D., on their usual tours to see and laugh at those less fortunate than them, what little Egypt itself had to offer was history nonetheless as the young Mamluk outsmarted his adversaries to accompany them on their tour of the world. It wasn't until years later, Duval assimilated himself with the slave soldier community and trained himself to take over the ship. Taken as a prisoner, Duval himself found his life a very short one though accomplished in his own expectations, he welcomed the hindsight of death and felt completely comfortable with it. Little to his own ability of comprehension, he was taken to a laboratory used by the human organization in order to find more effective ways to take the world of power in a new degree. He was a class guinea pig, the organization's laboratory had stolen various bodies of extraterrestrials to design their own, prior to the revelation of what was to come, inadvertently summoning some twisted apparition of it's origin. Duval found his body tattered with seals and talismans about in a ritualistic manner. It wasn't soon that he would meet their own creation known as Soakudo.

The daemon energy ruthlessly consumed the operatives in the laboratory following its horrific creation, the seemingly cultivated human bodies which lied in waste for its sacrificial nourishment littered the floor as a decorations to the subdued adolescent which was known as The Mamluk. The spectral embodiment soon turned to consume Duval as well, if not for the restrictions the scientists placed on his body which in turn piqued the entity's interest as he joined himself as raw power into the boy, only for the two to come to a term of agreement and for Mamluk to accurately suppress the corruptible energy into his brain and control the ruinic energy completely. Although in absorption, Duval actively conversates with he entity which lies within his soul, the astral projection which makes his body itself that the intellect of the operatives put together was the Mamluk able to employ the abilities of his partner to his will, and from his display, the Mamluk society accepted Duval into their ranks of their underground army. At this moment The Mamluk made his decision to do as he wanted and drift the continents, although it became clear to him, neigh his duty as a Mamluk, but for his own pleasure, he decided to track closely and record these actions, though he cared not which side better preferred his company, as Sumat's own pursuit is the pure ascension of knowledge. More importantly, how he could force the world he lives in to move without doing a thing on his own.



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PostSubject: Re: Usurping Mamluk   Tue Sep 11, 2012 5:05 am

Before I check this, can you write a brief description of each of your powers so I know what I'm approving. I can see them being used in a number of ways, so I'd like a guideline to see.
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PostSubject: Re: Usurping Mamluk   Tue Sep 11, 2012 2:24 pm

Such actions as specified have been followed.
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PostSubject: Re: Usurping Mamluk   Tue Sep 11, 2012 3:17 pm

It is still to vague...you have different types of dark energy such as Umbrakinesis, Dark Matter,Death Force,Dark Force etc.

Dangerous influence is more of an ability.

An example of the difference between the two is if I had weather manipulation as my power. Thunderbolt(my character shooting lightning out their ass) would be the ability. Powers are the potential and abilities are the manifestation.
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PostSubject: Re: Usurping Mamluk   Tue Sep 11, 2012 5:52 pm

The first ability has been simplified to exclude the confusion with dark affiliated propaganda. Allow me to explain that the second power is not passive, unlike the two abilities itself. The second power can only be employed and used through the abilities that have been posted.
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PostSubject: Re: Usurping Mamluk   Tue Sep 11, 2012 6:28 pm

Excuse us for taking so long and wanting more information on your powers. We've had previous times where people abused it out of vagueness. Can you give some form of examples of how it can be used, cause how it's put right now it could literally be anything on the grand list of things. Sorry for being so extremely cautious about this. When we don't have anything to refer to offsite, we need extreme details on-site. We understand they can be used through abilities posted, but we need to know the guideline for these abilities. What could you possibly do to another with this energy? Is it like heat energy? Does it cause one to go mad? Just a guideline of the nature of your power since there's nothing for us to look at to compare it too.


—Name: Basasiri Intellect
—Rank:C
—Power:Demonic Influence
—Description: The abundance of energy within the individual can spread out on command, to where Mamluk's senses are entwined with such energy and can detect discrepancies within he field due to its opposing nature of its own.

Give us a range on this. Something within 30 meters of radius would be fine
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PostSubject: Re: Usurping Mamluk   Wed Sep 12, 2012 12:50 am

The abilities have been re-vamped, please tell me what you think. Though I must say that there is not anything that is meant to be hidden in the powers. The two energy related powers is a just a category of which the abilities fall under. If it's not on the application, I can attest that nothing else will be used; to assure your own superstitions. The energy in question is simply pure energy, though it can be described as inert and Chi, the maximum ranges of abilities I plan to branch off from the ability I will put down before approval in a whole different section. If such is unacceptable, it will be changed.
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PostSubject: Re: Usurping Mamluk   Thu Sep 13, 2012 1:17 pm

Ok, I see. Anyway approved unless a staff member needs clarification on something.
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