Mission Prestige

Topic Name: Ms mine gets the goods
Topic link: https://marvelunlimited.forumotion.com/t802-miss-mime-got-the-good-mission
Topic Participants:

[Ryan D. glasglow.] [RyanD] - [Shield]

[Mischeif] [Mocking Bird] -[N/A
[Micheal] [The unknowable harlem] [SHIELD]




Topic Description: A treacherous robot, and a mime gets its day ruined.

You need to fix this. Not the right link to the topics. Not the names of the people either. And link the mission on this aswell. Can't grade it till its right.

Once it is fixed, give my share to Ms. Flash.

[Ryan D. glasglow.] [RyanD] - [Shield]
[Mischeif] [Mocking Bird] -[Suicide Corps]
[Micheal Thompson] [The unknowable harlem] [SHIELD]
NPC

Next time get everyone's full name. It becomes a pain to do this if the template isn't followed exactly.

Length: 4

English:

[Ryan D. glasglow.] [RyanD] - [Shield] - 5
[Mischeif] [Mocking Bird] -[Suicide Corps] - 5
[Micheal Thompson] [The unknowable harlem] [SHIELD] - 5
NPC - 5


Quality of Story: 3 The amount of fail..was..wow

Quality of Writing:

[Ryan D. glasglow.] [RyanD] - [Shield] - 8
[Mischeif] [Mocking Bird] -[Suicide Corps] - 10 [He saved the entire mission]
[Micheal Thompson] [The unknowable harlem] [SHIELD] - 7
NPC - 7


Faction:

SHIELD - 7

Suicide - 5

Total:


[Ryan D. glasglow.] [RyanD] - [Shield] 20 + 30 = 50
[Mischeif] [Mocking Bird] -[Suicide Corps] 22 + 30 = 52
[Micheal Thompson] [The unknowable harlem] [SHIELD] 19
NPC - 19 + 15 for NPC = 34

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