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Posts : 521 Join date : 2012-06-26

For your first modification choose which leg it is in. Also go into more details about the funnel. How many post do you need to run around them to completely remove the air where they can't breathe. How fast and how high will they be thrown if you run around them the other way? Around 50mph would be acceptable. For the oxygen part, I'd go with two posts of being constantly in the middle of the funnel. Also how small down the funnel how to be around? 20 feet, etc?

For the Vibration core, leave vibrating through objects at higher ranks. Thats B rank skill with speed. The other section is fine, but you can cut down the post cool down to like four posts if you want. Making you have to use the absorb and reflect blunt damage rarely.

Your last one is fine, but say you're twice as slow for three posts before you speed returns back to the way it was before the increase.

Posts : 521 Join date : 2012-06-26

Add how far you need to be away from the opponent for the funnel to form. Also say the damage reflected by the vibration move is the same damage you would have received.

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approved for training

Posts : 45 Join date : 2012-07-22

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Posts : 521 Join date : 2012-06-26

Make sure AI systems need some kind of uplink, also only machines up to your level and etc can be affected. Also for the keep the speed part, I'm shaky on this seeing how unstoppable a super speedster robot already is. And your top speed is already like, what? 420, which makes you practically an unstoppable battering ram when used right. Give me some time to talk with other staff members about that one.

Posts : 137 Join date : 2012-06-20

phase wrote:: Name: Speed force beams.
Rank:C+
Body Part:Hands
Power Source:Speed Force
Description: A modification that increases Phase 1's speed by 70. Beams of red and yellow eject from the palms of his hands.

Rank C: Capable of putting a human down and out, Can put a large dent in a car, medium in a truck, small in anything bigger, armored vehicles recieve no damage.

Rank B: Can send a person with super endurance to the ground, Cars are destroyed, medium trucks or highly damaged, Medium trucks are slightly damaged, Armored vehicles recieve minor damage.

Rank A: Can Shatter a Metorite or a comet with ease, most people except those with same or higher invulnerability or highly damaged, Most vehicles explode or be destroyed. Capable of destroying two city bocks when fully charged.

Rank S: Unstoppable beams of devastaing power, capable of destroying most enemies except those with invulenerability of same rank. ANyone under will recieve massive damage and rank B and below can be destroyed. Powerful enough to Destroy several City blocks when fully charged.

What do you mean put a human down? As in knock them out? How far does this beam shoot from you and how fast aswell. For the B rank strength you say medium trucks are slightly damaged and are highly damaged. Rank A shattering a meteorite/comet is S rank level unless the comet is super small. Destroying two city blocks is kinda ridiculous. Exactly how is it doing this?

Phase wrote:: Name: Speed force cannon.
Rank:C
Body Part:Chest
Power Source:Speed Force
Description:A modifcation that increases Phase 1's speed by 70, A large beam of red and yellow eject from the chest.

Rank C: Can put down someone with Invulenerability of the same rank or lower, Can destroy a car, highly damage a truck, medium damage anything bigger, pierce armor vehicles.

Rank B: Can put down someone with Invulenerability of the same rank or lower. Can annhilate any vehicle the size of a regular truck, does high damage to anything bigger, Can disable armored vehicles.

Rank A: Can put down someone with Invulnerability of the same rank or lower. Can annihilate any vehicle including Armored vehicles. Can wipe out five city blocks fully charged. Takes down anything the size of a Jumbo jet. Does high damage to Vibranium and Any other known super metal.

Rank S: Capable of destroying anyone with Invulnerability of the same rank or lower. Can wipe out half a city fully charged, Can destroy most any obstacle even those made of Admantium or Vibranium.

What do you mean by put down? Injure them and knock them to the ground? Since this seems stronger than the regular beams, put a cooldown on this for about 3 posts for it to recharge after use. Also a speed and a distance it can fire before dispersing. Rank A wiping out five city blocks? How is it doing this? Is the ray enlarging enough to blow it all away? Also how does an energy beam do high damage to some of the sturdiest metals such as Vibranium and super metal. High damage to these should be S rank. No beam should be able to completely destroy these two metals if they are at full power. And for destroying any with invulnerability same rank or lower, make it so it takes more than just one shot. They're invulnerable for a reason.

Phase wrote:: Name: Speed and momentum absorbtion.
Rank:C+
Body Part:Core
Power Source:Speed Force
Description: A modification that increases his speed by 70, Phaze's body can absorb the momentum and speed of objects and people around him and makes himself faster while slowing objects and enemies.

You need to get ALOT more specific with this. How much can he absorb from NPCs? Limitless absorbing the speed of cars and people isn't gonna cut it, so I need a total amount of NPC controlled things you can absorb momentum from. When it comes to PCs how much of a percentage are you taking from their speed when you do this, and I suspect you're touching them to do this aswell. Don't make the percentage too high, it should be in the upper teens maybe.

Posts : 45 Join date : 2012-07-22

Edited.

Posts : 1147 Join date : 2012-05-23

When I said NPC and how much you can take, I meant how many NPCs you can drain. Like three cars total in one topic, etc and such. Not the speed you can drain. You can take all the speed.

For the repulsor hands

10 miles is a nooo. A mile is S rank material right there. 10 miles would not sustain any energy long enough to be achieved or w/e. Tired.

You need to increase the length it can go by rank.

C rank [blank] meters

B rank [blank] meters

So on and So forth. Also what do you mean by this fully charged stuff? If you're charging these, then no other modifications should be used as it's gathering energy there solely for the charge.

This goes the same for your chest canon. And wiping out half a city? I know that sounded really OP when you were writing it. -.- Cut it down to a number of blocks below 10

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