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PostSubject: Omen Blackthorn [done]   Sun Jul 13, 2014 8:01 pm


Omen Blackthorn


“I would rather you love me, but if not love, fear will do.”



The Biography
alternate textBirth Name: Omen Blackthorn
Aliases: 'Alice Coeur', Semiazas , 'The Blue General'
Gender: Female
Age: Unknown
Birth Date: Undocumented
Class: Otherworldly

Appearance:
Easily a natural beauty, the only thing Omen ever adds is eye makeup and lip stick. She stands at a height of 5 feet, 7 inches with a body type that perfectly mixes athletic and curvy; A generous bust line, thin waist, considerable hips, and legs for days. Her skin is creamy and seemingly devoid of any natural marks but a single beauty mark below her bottom lip. Omen has long black hair, reminiscent of ink with blueish highlights, that reaches about halfway down her back. This coloring brings out the soft blue coloring of her eyes. The Blackthorn symbol is branded on to her left hand, a 4 petaled and intricate flower is above her right breast in red ink with a Latin inscription below it, and she has a 'tramp stamp' tattoo made up of a subtly demonic symbol used to mark her as one of them. There is a long, thin scar just below her bust line that has a matching 'exit wound' in the middle of her back. Her style seems to favor Eastern fashion, but she has a certain 'rich' quality to the way she dresses when she's out and about.

Personality:alternate text
To many, there doesn't seem to be much that can phase a woman like Omen. She never shows any great height of emotion -whether it be in the form of yelling at someone, or crying- unless it is some form of happiness. This isn't to say she's happy all the time, but mostly keeps herself subdued to keep those around her guessing. Contrary to the belief she's always cold and merciless, she feels compassion for even stomping a cockroach with her heel. However, she'd done what needed to be done in killing it, and won't lose sleep over the fact it's already happened. This is how she sees everything. Remorse, regret, maybe even sadness, but her hand will never waver. She may even offer a sad smile as apology she destroys your life.

Omen is quick as a whip, and doesn't suffer fools lightly, but her patience is admirable. She'll do whatever it takes to get something she wants, whether it be through seduction or brute force, regardless of how long she has to wait out whatever is holding her back for the best opportunity. The woman would make an amazing actor, and an ever better thief. Faking things such as friendship, attraction, and even love comes easily to her. Trust and respect were meant to be earned, but it's hard to wrest them away from a woman like Omen. Her affectionate love and loyalty is entirely conditional outside of a few select individuals.



The Capability


Specialties:

Main Specialty: Projection
Sub Specialty: Physical Prowess

Powers:

Main Power: Demonic Manipulation; The power to create, destroy, and control demons and their demonic energies. Through this power Omen is able to -but is not limited to- call demons from hell itself, force possession and perform ultimate exorcisms, and even create brand new demons from living creatures.

Main Power: Demonic Ice Manipulation; This is the power to create and manipulate demonic ice. It's demonic nature comes out in it's black coloration streaked through with several shades of blue, it's extremely cold temperatures, and invoking incredible burning pain as if it were fire when in close proximity or touching it, though produces frost bite instead of actual burns. This ice can not be melted by natural means, which means if left alone it simply won't melt. Omen herself can't be physically harmed by it.

Main Power: Curse Inducement; A power that allows one to place hexes, curses, or bad luck on people, places, and things. This can be passive, trigger based, or even active at the moment it's placed. Through rituals and spells, she can choose different effects each one will cause and when; The effects vary depending on Omen's mood and expendable power, but usually include bad luck, sickness, infertility, erectile dysfunction, drawing natural disasters, power disruption/malfunctions, causing insanity and other mental problems, or partial/full transformations/deformities. The difference between curses/hexes and traditional magic is that curses either wear off after a certain time or are breakable/detectable.

Main Power: (1/2 Price)
Sub Power: (1/2 Price)
Sub Power: (1/2 Price)

Flaw #1: Holy Aversion-Bane; Being a demonic creature has it's...downsides. She can't cross on to hallowed ground for one, and doing so causes intense sickness, physical weakness, and loss of her power over the course of 4 posts. Just throwing  a bible at her wouldn't  be very effective, but holy water or a cross would do the trick instead. Hearing Bible verses or reading them can cause the same effects as crossing on to hallowed ground, as well as eventual unconsciousness on the 5th post. These do not have to be consecutive posts, but all in the same topic. Crosses or other holy objects held in her presence will seem to start generating their own heat, getting hotter the closer they get to her but unable to actually burn anyone but Omen herself. In which case, the size of the object and how long it is held to her skin determines how serious the burn is.

Flaw #2: Salt-Bane; Another factor of her demonic nature, the purification qualities of salt can be used to deter her magic or weaken her. Ingesting salt alone, like the traces amounts found in food, won't really bother her. In greater amounts, she becomes very ill and is overwhelmed with the need to get the salt out of her system. Omen also can not cross an unbroken salt line, and scattering a large amount of salt over one of her creations -such as a ritual circle, or a hex bag- can nullify or weaken it depending on how powerful it originally is.


Abilities:

Demonic Ice Manipulation:
 

Demon Manipulation:
 

Skills:

Skill Name: Demonic Chill Emanation
Skill Specialty: Projection
Skill Range: Up to 10 meters
Skill Description: Essentially, this is something like a physical aura -usually unconsciously surfacing-that appears physically outwards from her body and demonic ice as creeping frost. It holds the same effects as her demonic ice in it's original form -causing pain upon contact, and frost bite- and will expand of it's own accord to anything it can touch. This frost also holds a sort of presence on it's own, an incredible sense of foreboding and dread, but does melt on it's own. When it melts, it leaves no water trail.

Skill Name: Kyusho-Jutsu Mastery
Skill Specialty: Physical Prowess
Skill Range: n/a
Skill Description: Omen has mastered the use of hand to hand combat in the form of pressure point manipulation. She's memorized every pressure point found in the human body, and knows how to utilize them through very fast, painful hits like knife jabs to be sure she hits her target and gets the desired effect. It's become it's own style of fighting that centers around speed, dodging, and rapid bursts of physical attacks to focused areas to cause intense pain, loss of use, disorientation, and other effects.

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PostSubject: Re: Omen Blackthorn [done]   Mon Jul 14, 2014 10:33 am

Hello,

I rather like your character, however there seems to be a little confusion as to the relation of your flaws.

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Flaw #1: Religion-Bane; Being a demonic creature has it's...downsides. She can't cross on to hallowed ground for one, and doing so causes intense sickness, physical weakness, and loss of her power over the course of 4 posts. Throwing a Bible or cross at her won't be very effective, unless it's wielded by a true believer. With this condition met, hearing Bible verses or reading them can cause the same effects as crossing on to hallowed ground, as well as eventual unconsciousness on the 5th post. These do not have to be consecutive posts, but all in the same topic. Crosses or other holy objects held in her presence by these people will seem to start generating their own heat, getting hotter the closer they get to her but unable to actually burn anyone but Omen herself. In which case, the strength of one's faith determines whether it's a 1st or 3rd degree burn.

I'm not really sure, but I'm guessing "religion" means a Judo-Christian one, which is fine I suppose. Religion isn't really a "factor" but more of a way of life/thought process. Like someone with a democracy or "hippie" bane. I'd must prefer a "holy" bane. Like the example in the flaw page, such "religious" items work regardless of faith. No one has conditions on silver bullets or UV bullets (Vampires anyone), you shouldn't put conditions like "True believer" or "strength of one's faith" as that really circumvents the spirit (pun) of the flaw system.  

Flaw #2: Salt-Bane; Another factor of her demonic nature, the purification qualities of salt can be used to deter her magic or weaken her. Ingesting salt alone, less than a teaspoon perhaps, won't really bother her. After this point however, she becomes very ill and is overwhelmed with the need to get the salt out of her system. Omen also can not cross an unbroken salt line, and scattering a large amount of salt over one of her creations -such as a ritual circle, or a hex bag- can nullify or weaken it depending on how powerful it originally is.  

Having a bane of salt, means like a silver bullet, a salt pellet (al la shotgun) can really do some damage. Each pellet is like the size of a bb or a bit smaller... which makes it less than  teaspoon, a full teaspoon of salt compressed can be almost the size of a marble... which travelling fast would be a bullet, old fashion but still a bullet. Which like a silver bullet could kill you or seriously maim you. (Though lucking for you, salt makes a terrible long range bullet Razz ) So, please change that accordingly.
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PostSubject: Re: Omen Blackthorn [done]   Mon Jul 14, 2014 7:17 pm

Fixed. Hopefully someone won't think to force me to swallow a lot of seawater.
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PostSubject: Re: Omen Blackthorn [done]   Mon Jul 14, 2014 7:34 pm

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