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 Z - The Cast Away From Hell [DONE]

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PostSubject: Z - The Cast Away From Hell [DONE]   Tue Jul 08, 2014 3:41 pm


Z
In Hell, I had purpose.  In Life, you don't.





The Biography


Birth Name: N/A
Aliases: Z
Gender: Male
Age: N/A
Birth Date: N/A
Class:  Blessed/Damned

Appearance:
Z takes on the appearance of strong, tall man, appearing to be in his mid 30's.  He has a muscular, athletic build and stands at a height of 6'4" while weighing roughly 250 lbs.  His skin is of a pale white with a rough looking texture to it.  If he were to stand completely still, he could easily pass as a marble statue. However there is an obvious give away, his hair and his eyes.  Z's hair is very long and flows beautifully with a lively brown color contrasting against his death like skin. His eyeballs are black as opposed to the white eyeballs people normally have and his irises glow a vivid yellow/gold color with no pupil.  Z's teeth are just as white as his skin, straight but more menacing than beautiful since they're all sharp.  His tongue and the inside inside of his mouth is also black.  Even his saliva is black.  In fact all of his body fluids are black, like oil.  Z's fingernails and toenails are also black and sharp like claws.  He has a visible scar on his chest shaped like the letter 'Z'.  The scar covers most of his chest.  Z prefers to be in his natural state and disregards clothing the majority of the time when seen.  In other words, Z is naked 99% of the time.  So to address the elephant in the room, yes his penis can be seen and it is flaccid nearly always, yet still beautiful and above average in both length and girth.  Z also has a scar from a stab wound in the middle of his forehead.  

Personality:

Z has the natural instinct to cause trouble for others, whether it be in an obvious and physical way or a subtle and manipulative way.  He has zero regard for human life and seems those of the living as inferior to him.  He has undying loyalty to his master, Satan himself and aims to please and entertain the ruler of hell.  Though he doesn't know exactly what it means to entertain Satan, he has to do his best to figure it out by living this second life through evil and leading others to darkness as well.  He believes he must bring Hell on Earth.  Z is not easily swayed from his cause and stays true to his purpose like a knight for his king.  He carries himself as if noble but it would be a mistake to think he truly is.  Being from Hell, Z is very disgusted by those of faith and good will, however he can't help but wish to bring them the most misery in hopes of corrupting their holy lives forever.  Z finds company in those of darkness but that does not mean he sees them as allies but rather pawns to help him entertain Satan.  Z does not really know the world today or the ways of its people, seeing that he died long, long ago.  However he is willing to learn and adapt to the current lifestyles in effort to fulfill his purpose.  He is Satan's tool and he will gladly serve as such.



The Capability
 


Specialties:

Main Specialty: Projection
Sub Specialty: Physical Prowess

Powers:

Main Power: Sin Manipulation -User can sense and manipulate the sins and vices of themselves and others, whether increasing, decreasing, causing or otherwise chancing envy, even manifesting the emotional energy to physical level.

Main Power: Magic [Illusion] - The user can perform the most common tricks or the most power illusionary spells. They can perform vanishing acts, pull dozens of scarfs out of their mouths, or even create conjuring spells from various bizarre spells.

Sub Power: Regeneration - The user can rapidly regenerate, in other words, they recreate lost or damaged tissues, organs and limbs, sometimes slowing, or even stopping, aging.

Sub Power: Supernatural Strength - Users are glaringly, obviously and super/unnaturally stronger than their race because their capabilities are pushed to the superhuman level; making them immensely stronger than normal members of their species (in that 'verse) can be achieve by any method of training.


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Abilities:

Name: Hell's Strength
Range: N/A
Rank: S-Rank
Power Type: Sub
Duration: N/A
Power: Supernatural Strength
Description: Z has an unnaturally strong body and is so strong that he can lift 5,500 lbs.

Name: Regenerative Healing
Range: N/A
Rank: S-Rank
Power Type: Sub
Duration: N/A
Power: Regeneration
Description:  Z's body heals much more rapidly than normal.  Light wounds heal instantly, moderate wounds take 1-2 posts, and severe but not lethal/fatal wounds heal in 3 posts. During the time it takes to heal moderate to severe wounds, Z is unable to exercise his other powers.

Name: Ash Storm
Range: 35 Meters
Rank: B-Rank
Power Type: Main
Duration: 4 Posts
Power: Magic [Illusion]
Description: Z cast an illusion over the surrounding area.  This illusion causes a sudden shift in the winds and a spontaneous whirlwind composed of hot ashes from hell.  The ash clouds hinder the sight of those within, making it impossible to see more than 2 meters ahead of them.  The smell of the ash is overwhelming and can cause coughing and chocking.  It's also hot to the touch but not too hot that it causes burns, just irritation to the skin.  Being that it's an illusion, none of these effects are real and only take place in the set zone it is casted.  If you escape the zone, the illusion is dispelled for you.  From within the zone however, it seems that this storm is taking place over the entire location.  So there is no noticeable boundary unless you already escape the zone, then you would see the glowing red circle which marks the zone.  Entering the zone again brings you back into the illusion.  Z is unaffected by his own illusion.

Name: Sloth
Range: 20 Meters
Rank: B-Rank
Power Type: Main
Duration: 3 Posts
Power: Sin Manipulation
Description:  Z brings out one of the 7 deadly sins in a target(s) through eye contact or physical contact.  Sloth causes a target to become sluggish and uncaring.  The person get's an overwhelming feeling to lay around and/or sleep with no regard for anything else, not even their own life.  This ability is especially effective against those who already suffer from sloth or have a "lazy" personality type.  If the affected target moves beyond the range of Z's control and manipulation, the effects will diminish immediately.  But that's better said than done when one is affected by this particular sin.  

Skills:

Skill Name: Sin Sense
Skill Specialty: Projection
Skill Range: 60 Meters
Skill Description: Z has the natural skill to sense the sins of others.  Since everyone is born with natural sin, he can usually sense anyone.  Those with darker alignments or who have given into their own sins are much easier to find, having a stronger presence to Z.  Where as those who follow a path of faith and light are weaker to sense.  The stronger the presence, the more Z can tell about someone.

Skill Name: Natural Fighter
Skill Specialty: Physical Prowess
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: Z was reborn with natural fighting talent.  He has sharp reflexes and combat intuition, with a keen eye for weaknesses in someone's fighting style.  He's often able to out maneuver his opponents or use their fighting styles against them.

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The Background
 

History:

Long ago, when the world was much different than it is now, lived a man.  This man had a family in a world where people are said to live like beasts.  Though that's just speculation made by the arrogant who live in today's world to believe they are superior to their ancestors.  In truth, the people of then lived more bountiful lives.  There was greater joy back then but also greater horror.  A world where magic was medical treatment and also a weapon of mass destruction.  

The man that lived back then was a user of magic, taught by his grandfather but manipulated by the spirits from which whispered in his ears.  He used his magic not to heal as his grandfather did but to manipulate others so that he may get what he wanted.  He caused much turmoil in the lives of others, including his own family.  He sacrificed a daughter for power in a tribe, giving her away as if nothing but a child's toy.  He built his throne on the miseries of others.  He cared not for their tears as long as he could smile.  His reign would come to an end through a series of of unfortunate events made against him.  

First, the grandmother of one of the many families he had wronged and oppressed cursed him.  He had caught wind of this curse and believed that by killing the woman, her curse would never see fulfillment.  However by doing so, he had only multiplied the curses power.  

The first part of the curse had him fall to the 7 sins in ways one could not imagine.  His greed, his lust, his wrath, his envy, his sloth, his pride, and his gluttony ALL transformed him into a being worse than any human imaginable.  It got to the point that it took his entire tribe to turn on him in a Coup, causing him to flee.  It was when he fled and felt at his weakest that he would plead to the spirits and confide in his wife, whom he had abused and taking advantage of like everyone else.  Yet for some reason she had stayed with him as he fled when even his children were against him.   When he slept, his wife would bind him physically to a tree.  She would express all her feelings and those of others, forcing him to listen for once in his life.  She would do this while also mutilating his body, cutting the 'Z' into his chest and cursing him all the same.  Once her tears ran dry and she was ready to move on, she would take the hunting knife and stab her husband in the forehead, banishing his spirit to hell for all eternity.

The man's spirit was made to suffer many horrible years in Hell.  He felt no peace.  He was even made into one of Satan's servants, who'd wait on him as his slave.  It was not until now that Satan would pick him and cast him into the New World of the living without giving him a reason other than entertainment.  The man was reborn and placed into a world he knew nothing about and not sure what he was meant to do other than entertain the one who controlled his soul.  For the man, this place was no different than Hell except the fact that these people didn't know they were there.  He would simply take the time given to him in this world to explore what it meant to entertain Satan.



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PostSubject: Re: Z - The Cast Away From Hell [DONE]   Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:51 pm

App Done

My 2 Flaws are toward 1k Prestige.

1000 - 300[2 Sub Powers, 1/2 off Each] - 540[2 C abilities to S-Rank] - 100[2 C abilities to B-Rank] = 60 Prestige Remaining
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PostSubject: Re: Z - The Cast Away From Hell [DONE]   Fri Jul 11, 2014 5:20 pm

Heller? Anyone there?
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PostSubject: Re: Z - The Cast Away From Hell [DONE]   Sun Jul 13, 2014 11:50 am

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PostSubject: Re: Z - The Cast Away From Hell [DONE]   Sun Jul 13, 2014 12:22 pm

Hello,

So, I'm not allowed to really check stuff, but I'd give out pointers I know are a bit of an issue.


Sub-powers are supposed to be in relation to main powers, which the exclusion of exceptions in the power listing. (Invulnerability, shielding, etcetc)

Anyway
[7/12/2014 2:02:11 PM] Orange Thunder: Question
[7/12/2014 2:02:19 PM] Orange Thunder: Do sub-powers have to be related to your main powers?
[7/12/2014 2:03:07 PM] donjuliusgreen: Yes ...except the small group of universal powers listed
[7/12/2014 2:03:21 PM] Orange Thunder: What does that mean?
[7/12/2014 2:03:24 PM] donjuliusgreen: No sub specialties are needed
[7/12/2014 2:03:29 PM] donjuliusgreen: huh
[7/12/2014 2:04:21 PM] donjuliusgreen: I said yes as in yes they do have to be related.....but in the powers section there are a few exceptions

Listed here
http://marvelunlimited.forumotion.com/t1819-attributes-for-main-branch-sub-powers

I believe you will have to make such a change...
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PostSubject: Re: Z - The Cast Away From Hell [DONE]   Sun Jul 13, 2014 8:26 pm

Scarecrow wrote:
Hello,

So, I'm not allowed to really check stuff, but I'd give out pointers I know are a bit of an issue.


Sub-powers are supposed to be in relation to main powers, which the exclusion of exceptions in the power listing. (Invulnerability, shielding, etcetc)

Anyway
[7/12/2014 2:02:11 PM] Orange Thunder: Question
[7/12/2014 2:02:19 PM] Orange Thunder: Do sub-powers have to be related to your main powers?
[7/12/2014 2:03:07 PM] donjuliusgreen: Yes ...except the small group of universal powers listed
[7/12/2014 2:03:21 PM] Orange Thunder: What does that mean?
[7/12/2014 2:03:24 PM] donjuliusgreen: No sub specialties are needed
[7/12/2014 2:03:29 PM] donjuliusgreen: huh
[7/12/2014 2:04:21 PM] donjuliusgreen: I said yes as in yes they do have to be related.....but in the powers section there are a few exceptions

Listed here
http://marvelunlimited.forumotion.com/t1819-attributes-for-main-branch-sub-powers

I believe you will have to make such a change...

I see...that limits creativity but I can see why you'd want something like that in place.

Though tell me, what is a sub-power of something so specific/linear as both Super-Strength and Regeneration?

I'm trying to make this character around a theme and your "rule" is a hinderance to that theme. I figured these powers make sense for something Demon-esque and figuratively immortal.

Not saying that I have an issue with changing things around but would love for someone to assist me in my creation for I would love to keep what I have imagined in my mind for the most part. To me, this makes sense for the character and doesn't seem like I'm all over the place trying to get "uber powers".
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PostSubject: Re: Z - The Cast Away From Hell [DONE]   Sun Jul 13, 2014 10:46 pm

For your regen. Instant for small wounds 1-2 for moderate and then 3 post for everything. And during all of this except for small wounds you can't have any other actions while you heal.

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PostSubject: Re: Z - The Cast Away From Hell [DONE]   Mon Jul 14, 2014 10:37 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Z - The Cast Away From Hell [DONE]   Tue Jul 15, 2014 12:10 am

Approved. First hint I get of abuse I'm unapproving.

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