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PostSubject: Jack Harper - Lone Star/ Renegade "Finished"   Sat Jun 28, 2014 3:20 am


Jack Harper

“It is always easier to fight for one's principles than to live up to them.”



The Biography


Birth Name: Jack Harper
Aliases: Lone Star, Renegade
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birth Date: March 9th
Class:  Human

Appearance: Jack contains light blonde hair that goes just past his chin in length, as well as coming down in front of his eyes at the front. It’s usually straight, unless Jack decides to style his hair to have a more spiked appearance with his favorite AXE gel. The light blonde color would actually remind you of pound cake, both in its shade and the softness of his hair when you run through it with your fingers.  The color of his eyes takes on the pigmentation of gunmetal blue. Gunmetal-blue eyes are cold, hard-looking, and shining.  They contain a lot of white in the iris that makes them appear blue-gray like metal.  Guns are usually made of steel and when they're polished and oiled, they pick up blue highlights.  Gunmetal blue has a dangerous, ruthless connotation, and eye contact with Jack usually leads to an early assumption of his personality.

Jack contains a physically fit body, with only 14% of body fat. His actual measurements go as follows, with his chest being 50 inches, his waist being 35 inches, his arms/biceps being 20 inches, and his legs/thighs standing at 31 inches. As a Caucasian male, Jack’s skin tone is mildly pale, but contains a small shine to it as if he was oiled.  He has broad shoulders, and a fierce dark face. It was a face to be dominated by, or to fight: never a face to patronize or pity. Jack contains a clear complexion, with the only abnormality being the small scar in the shape of a dash on his left eyebrow, towards the edge. The eyebrows themselves are thin and slightly pointy, containing the same color as his hair; they also help to compliment his short eyelashes. Rick’s sideburns are also thin, and he sports a short beard with a soul patch right under his lower lip.  His ears are small, and his nose is skinny and straight.  Jack also contains high cheek bones, with lips that could be seen by others as narrow.  And lastly, Jack has straight white teeth with a square jaw. All his movements are large and perfectly balanced, like those of a wild animal. Sometimes Jack can be seen standing with his hands behind his back, and it takes on the likeness of being in an “at ease” position. Jack is also exclusively left handed, all because of the small saying he heard as a child that stated “Those who rule over the left, can rule the world.”.

Basic Attire/Street Clothes - Jack wears an all-black formal suit made by Versace. The blazer is fully lined, double vented, with a two button closure. Flat-front slacks add a modern touch to the timeless look. The jacket is single breasted, containing grosgrain silk facings on a notched lapel. A notched lapel is considered less formal, so it is able to be worn on any occasion. His trousers contain a single silk braid covering the outer seams, they are also fitted. His outfit also contains a white dress shirt with white buttons; the dress shirt has Portofino cuffs along with silver cufflinks, with a detachable turn down collar. His black socks go along with his black patent leather Oxfords.

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Hero Attire/ Original Lone Star outfit (Retro Red Arrow)-  Jack wears a mainly black leather suit with a red chest. His quiver is now attached with two gray shoulder straps connected across the chest, and his black gloves are fingerless.. Speaking of his gloves they reach through half of his forearm. His right glove is more of a sleeve actually because it comes up to the biceps and has two patches near the forearm.. But yet still fingerless. He has two pouches on each side of his thighs. One on his left one on his right each are gray and look about the size of a twilight book but are actually light because of their plastic nature. On his left calf he keeps a little slit where he stores mini tools such as a quickblade or a toothpick. Then the custom Domino Mask, similar to  Lone Star's original  outfit.

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Personality: Jack is quiet, submissive and friendly on the surface, but inside he has an immense potential hidden, along with a strong, fierce independent streak. Jack can also be considered as one of the biggest dreamers you’ll ever meet, and desires to live in his own world at times.  Jack tends to look at life through rose-tinted glasses, something that allows him to emit charm, profundity, and romanticism that not many people can find in a man of his caliber. Rick, by nature, shuns confrontation, and it’s what makes him rather vulnerable at times. When encountered by the harsh realities of life, he usually retreats into his own world of imagination. People may view Jack as passive, or even slow and weak, but he often knows the best course for himself. Jack can be stubborn, but the ones who know him well will take this trifle shortcoming in their stride, usually because he can be so loving, caring, and compassionate. In the end, Jack has a tender heart, and he’s always trying to  reach out to rescue the less fortunate ones.


The Capability
 


Specialties:

Main Specialty: Weapons Expert
Sub Specialty: Physical Prowess
Sub Specialty:Techno Savvy


Skills:

Skill Name: Long Ranged Combat
Skill Specialty:[/b Weapons Expert
Skill Range:N/A
Skill Description: Because of his extensive background in weaponry Jack uses what he has learned about modern day guns and bow and arrows to use them in his favor. It doesn't hurt that he's been through long range battle simulations as well.

Skill Name: Kysei Fighting Method
Skill Specialty: Physical Prowess
Skill Range:N/A
Skill Description: Developed by Justo Deigues Serrano as the cumulation of his fighting experiences on the streets of Spain, the Keysi method is intended to be used for self defense in violent street level encounters. This method of fighting is well rounded, and can be applied in any situation.

Skill Name: Security Hack
Skill Specialty:Techno Savvy
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: Jack can use minor techno skill to override any C Rank or lower security appliances or weapons with the use of his smart phone. The results may vary depending on the appliance

Skill Name: Marksmen Eye
Skill Specialty: Weapons Expert
Skill Range: 20 Meters
Skill Description:  Because of his practice with long ranged weapons Jack was able to learn and get precise aim and accuracy on his target as long as they are in viewing distance. His viewing range is about that of 20Ft where he is at his peak performance.

Skill Name: Quick Draw
Skill Specialty: Weapon Expert, Physical Prowess
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description:  Just like his predecessor, Jack is good at drawing his weapons faster then the average wielder giving him the edge over most.


Skill Name: Hotwire
Skill Specialty: Techno Savy
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: Jack has spent a long time with vehicles and can hot wire them on the spot. Currently, Jack can only Hot wire C Rank  Vehicles such as cars, motorcycles, boats etc.

Skill Name:Enhanced Strength
Skill Specialty:Physical Prowess
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: Jack is practically a freak of nature from the way he was raised with the amounts of training. He can bench press/ Lift and Leg Press 1000lbs respectively

Skill Name:Enhanced Endurance
Skill Specialty:Physical Prowess
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: Renegade has exceptional cardio that can be rivaled to a track star. He can run for hours and participate in high intensity activities/movements without getting tired.

Skill Name:Enhanced Agility/Acrobatics
Skill Specialty:Physical Prowess
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: Due to the extensive training that Jack received as a child , he has become adapt in getting in and out of situations that cause for extreme skill in such. These include climbing and scaling buildings, Running on walls and or general acrobatics. At the current age of 19 and not even hitting his prime, Jack runs at the speed of 23.35 miles per hour.

Skill Name:Enhanced Hearing
Skill Specialty:Physical Prowess
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: Humans can generally hear sounds with frequencies between 20 Hz and 20,000 Hz (the audio range or hearing range).  Impressively, Jack's hearing caps the maximum potential of whats humanly possible with 20,000 Hz, he can even hear a pen drop from three blocks over.

Skill Name:Free Runner
Skill Specialty:Physical Prowess
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: Renegade is able to jump crawl climb and roll over certain objects normal humans cant. He even does this in a agile way making himself look different.

Skill Name:Resiliency
Skill Specialty:Physical Prowess
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: Renegade can take an extensive ass whipping and still get up. He's still within the peak of human limitations and not invincible, but can still operate even with injuries. Long story short, Jack has a lot of will power.


Skill Name:MCMAP "Marine Corps Martial Arts Program,"
Skill Specialty:Physical Prowess
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: The Close combat system of the Marine Corps  use of weapons, improvised weapons, bayonets, and parts of the gun other than the bullets.


Skill Name:Gun-Kata
Skill Specialty:Physical Prowess, Weapon Expert
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: On occasion when Jack has no other choice but to kill, he favors the technique that was taught by his grandparents,  Each fluid movement and position represents a maximum kill zone,  to inflict the maximum damage on the maximum number of opponents, while keeping the user  statistically clear of trajectories of return fire. Its so natural once learned that its almost a  basic thought process, increasing accuracy when using guns to 25% due to the maximum kill zone.

Skill Name:A.I
Skill Specialty:Techno savy
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: With Jack's massive tinkering, he developed an A.I to provide support.  This A.I can encrypt data, and do the regular hack, translate languages, Auto pilot, and other digital chores that Jack would have to do manually with his smart phone. With the A.i it can directly jack into the system to perform these tasks while JAck Focuses on combat. *This just states he has the knowledge of creating one(

Skill Name:Ease-dropper
Skill Specialty:Techno savy
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description:  Jack can use his smart phone to listen in on radio frequencies like a  police scanner and pick up on crime that's happening around in the said area. He can listen in on other radio frequencies like the enemies as well, and not be noticed.


Skill Name:Inventer
Skill Specialty:Techno Savy
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: Renegade unlike his predecessor, welcomes the new age of technology. With some of the knowledge he has, he might even have an easier time making them as well.   Renegade receives a 25% discount on new weapons/items

Skill Name:Enhanced Sight
Skill Specialty:Physical Prowess
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: Renegade now has an advanced Viewing range after being trained by the great lone star himself. . His viewing range is about that of 50Ft where he is at his peak performance. At 300FT he extremely skilled and at 800Ft he can still make an average shot.


Skill Name:Explosives Expert
Skill Specialty:Techno Savy, Weapon Expert
Skill Range: N/A
Skill Description: If it goes boom, jack knows about it. JAck is skilled with any kind of explosive whatsoever, knowing how to use them effectively. He also knows them inside and out, creating the bombs  or making an even better version of it.


Weapons/Devices:

Item Name:Electric Red bow and arrows
Item Range: N/a
Item Rank: C
Item Description: Its a mixture of a compound bow and arrow and a composite bow.. Very small and stature and can be kept concealed in a little pouch by folding it and.. Can be snapped back together instantly by waving it in the air or snapping it. Full steel beside the elastic string which is used for firing Arrows. The entire bow and arrow set is red and black.. The arrow head is red the shaft is black and the fletching is red. The head of the arrow is steel and the body is made from common bamboo with a coat of elastic over it, each arrow is 32" *Inherited by Lone star *
Item Power: n/A

Item Name:Special Domino mask
Item Range:
Item Rank:C-S
Item Description: A black domino mask with cybernetics built in.
Item Power:  By using his domino mask Red Arrow is able to see in many different visions. Mainly thermal, Heat , and night vision and also to keep track of his tracers. To activate their different modes Red Arrow must blink for 3 seconds to change the vision type. By activating these visions they enable Red Arrow to see for the max radius of 40 meters ahead of his already good vision. Another good use of the mask is shielding his eyes from gases such as tear gas and regular gases in general. *Inherited by  Lone Star*

Item Name: Electrical Collapsible Bo Staff
Item Range: N/A
Item Rank: C
Item Description: At first it looks like the size of a TV remote which is about 6 inches or better. Then when the middle of it is clicked the bo expands into a full on bo staff. Once in complete bo form the user has the option to slide that same button up to turn on an electric function which came from the same mechanics as a taser to the bo an electrical charge. Wen the button is slid back down Arrow deactivates the electricity.
Item Power: A staff with electrical abilities. The taser like effect lasts for three posts.

Item Name: Sniperess
Item Range: N/A
Item Rank:  A
Item Description: This gun also has a larger barrel allowing for two-three bullets being able to be shot at a time. He can do this because the gun has three triggers, one of the triggers allow for multiple shots to be fired at once, but with greater recoil. Another trigger is three round burst allowing him to shoot three precise bullets at once. The last trigger he can hold and shoot at about the speed of a SMG, but the recoil is so great that he would need to have a extremely strong grip on the gun.It uses 50CAL bullets. He has 500 bullets and it restores every thread.It has the range of a average sniper rifle. Which is 1000 Yards.
Item Power: Shoots bullets


Item Name: Colt Anaconda
Item Range: N/A
Item Rank:  C
Item Description: A steel gun with a wooden colored handle. The colt anaconda is a staple gun for that of professional gun slingers which allows them to shoot 8 round clips without a jam. Fires off 44.M special bullets. Can only use 2 clips per topic.
Item Power: Shoots bullets

Item Name: Mr, Shotty
Item Range: N/A
Item Rank:  A
Item Description:A small double barreled shotgun. With a clear covered clip at the bottom, which allows Ryan to see how many bullets he has left before he to reload. The shotgun has two platinum colored name plates on them, that say "Mr.Shotty, 2008"on the butt of the gun. The gun itself is gold, and the trigger is silver. A semi Automatic shotgun, which has little spread when is fired. It has a clip of 12, 20 Guage bullets. He had modified the gun's barrel To make it slightly larger so he can shoot multiple shots in one. He has two so he can Akimbo them, but If he wants to use it to the highest rate of fire he can only use one, because of he tries to single hand them one of them and shoot it at SMG speed he would literally blow his arm off.  So, he has to single hand one to shoot it at SMG speed. He has 300 shotgun shells and it resets every thread. It also has a iron sight, allowing for better accuracy. Range slightly better than that of a average shotgun because of reduced spread. The range of this gun is  100 Yards, then the bullets have no chance of hitting the target.
Item Power: Shoots bullets


Item Name: Fire Beam
Item Range: N/A
Item Rank:  C
Item Description:Consumer air butane torches are often claimed to develop flame temperatures up to approximately 1,700 K (1,430 °C; 2,600 °F). This temperature is high enough to melt many common metals, such as aluminum and copper. The beam hole opens up in the glove in a circle like manner to fire off. This move can also be used in 1 finger as a way to fix a gadget or something of the sort.
Item Power: Arrow releases a beam of fire energy from his suits hands which are used to harm an enemy or to burn through things seeing how the beams were made just to melt through weak metals like aluminum and copper or do real damage. The beams will only be able to shoot a large quantity of fire for 3 post. After that the fire will be small. Either way the maximum length is 3 feet.

Item Name: Red Tracers
Item Range: 1000 Meters
Item Rank:  A
Item Description:A red little button.. roach size When i say roach. I mean the ones you dont notice until they are on your computer screen. Like advil size.
Item Power:  By swallowing or wearing the tracery sometimes unknowingly the user can now find themselves being tracked by Jack at any given moment. . Created these from broken walkie talkie chips and computer pieces.


Item Name:OTF Knife
Item Range: N/A
Item Rank: D
Item Description: Retractable knife all steel.
used for stabbing. Thats pretty much all it does.. Stab cut slice chop and cuts salami. 10 inches long

Item Name:Filter Mask
Item Range: N/A
Item Rank: C
Item Description: A little electronic gas mask which covers just the mouth.
Item Power: Keeps all the air breathed by Red Arrow clean so he doesn't get effected by his own weapons or in some cases others.

Item Name:Desert Eagle
Item Range: N/A
Item Rank: C
Item Description: Standard black desert eagle. Holds 9 rounds a clip. Jack carries two clips a thread.  Muzzle Velocity is 470 m/s(.50AE), effective firing range is 200 Meters. The gun is made of steel and is known for its 45mm bullets
Item Power: Fires bullets

Item Name:Explosive balls/Gas Balls
Item Range: N/A
Item Rank: B
Item Description: Little black balls the size of marbles which appear to detonate when dropping after a 3 second interval. But when gas balls they are grey
Item Power: When dropped on the ground the explosive balls release an explosion which has the power to knock people cold out or stun them depending on durability or legit hurt them via minor wounds and or concussions. The most that can be used in 1 topic is 10 and they range 4 meters a piece. Created from nitro compounds and Azides which were bought from a russian drug dealer. When the gas balls are used they release the chemical Kolokol-1 into the air which can disorientate people of high rank and knockout those of lower rank.. No matter who it is the user will be stunned or knocked out for 2 post. The range of these are  4 meters a piece.. Can only use 10 per topic, and only 3 balls per post.

Item Name:Lightsaber (red)
Item Range: N/A
Item Rank: A
Item Description: Silver hilt with black lines with slight golden color near the top.
Item Power: This is a red pure energy blade  that can be turned on and off by a press of a button. It can cut through  Human tissue, wood, metal, and A rank defensive's/materials.

Item Name:Lone Boots
Item Range: n/a
Item Rank: B
Item Description: Black boots with thrusters on the soles.  http://images.motorcycleparts2u.com/xmoto-pics-1202/1257-0070-su-joe-rocket-boots-speedmaster-30-boots.jpg
Item Power: Lift Off - The boots allow the user to fly into the sky like someone whom has flight as their power. These boots allow for flight,hover and maneuver properly in the sky with ease. The top speed of the boots are 300MPH. To activate the boots the user must click his heels together (Something like Numbah 1 from KND). Turning them off works the same way.

Dat Blade - The boots allow for a small electrically charged Blade to come from both toes of the boot. The blades are exactly 5 inches long and emit a shock of 20,000 volts to whatever they stab. The blade comes out by Lone Star wiggling his toes in the boots.

Item Name:The Suit
Item Range: n/a
Item Rank: C
Item Description: An all black body suit plated with layers of cushion before being met on top with a layer of cybernetics and metal underneath being just plain leather. On the middle area of the suit aka the chest plate you see the symbol of a bat from the looks of it which is green. On his waist is a utility belt which has 14 compartments connected to the belt is two gun holsters one on each hand side. In the right hand of the suit there is a grappling hook which shoots out a little spear that ranges 90 meters like any grappling hook used as the users get away. On top of this is just a simple zipping brown thin coat which has 3 pouch like pockets on the inside. Not to mention there is a compartment on his back that can hold dual katana or a bigger  weapon like a sniper rifle. This suit does nothing but offer protection from minimum amount of physical combat. When pressed the bat symbol on the chest area will glow a bright green light. The hand area has an extra layer over it composing of plastic. On each leg there is a compartment which seem to have space to hold a bo like weapon.
Item Power: - C rank protection, and a means of transportation. and as a flashlight.

Item Name:Shuriken
Item Range: n/a
Item Rank: D
Item Description: They are steel shuriken. Ninja Stars as some like to call them. Meant for throwing or for close quarter combat. Can only be used 10 times per topic.
Item Power: Lift Off - Cutting, stabbing




The Background
 

History: My name is Jack Harper. My place of birth was in New York, Queens, the hospital was called North Shore University. I only know about my mom, Alicia Harper. I was never too sure of who my dad was, the only thing that my mom told me about him was the fact that he was in the military. His name was Francis Rogers, and he was a very estimable man. My mom studied psychology and sociology; she received a master’s degree in both the respectable issues. Alicia Harper was a psychologist that conducted studies and experiments with human beings, and she helped many people cope with their mental disorders. My childhood was pretty mediocre; nothing really went on when it came to exciting events.

Frankly speaking, I lived in an A-frame house, and the structure always seemed so weird  and unnatural compared to the neighbors living next to me. I also took in a german shepherd named Marcus, and he was my only friend for the time being when I was growing up. We did everything together, and he was very overprotective of me. Football was my favorite sport, and I tried my best to keep up with the Jets whenever they played on tv. Sadly, no matter how average and friendly I seemed, there was a few bullies on my block that seemed to get a hard on when they picked on me. The extensive bullying was taken too far  when they pushed me off my bike and attempted to steal it. I hit my head on the ground pretty rough on the cement pavement, and scarred my left eyebrow. Marcus was a guard dog, and overreacted when he saw me get assaulted. He bit one of the bullies on the leg and wouldn’t let go. The screams of help were heard around the neighborhood, and attracted  police officer who was doing usual rounds. The current setting before him was sending different signals as opposed to what actually happened, and he shot Marcus in the face.

I cried for days, I just lost my best friend in the whole wide world. My mom tried her best to console me, but I spent most of my time locked In my room. Even so, I would hear occasional barks and see Marcus  whimpering next to his grave. I never understood what that meant, I thought he died. I never told my mom because I didn’t want her to think that I was crazy, and Marcus continued to do this for a week at sundown. I eventually came outside to comfort him, but it wasn’t easy. I apologized to him, I hugged him, and I told him how much I hated myself for letting him go. Marcus looked at me with his honest eyes, as if he understood every word, and telling me that it wasn’t my fault. He then disappeared, and I never saw him again.  I backed out my room again, spiraling into depression at the tender age of seven. My mom decided that it was time to visit my grandparents In Florida, a small vacation to get over the demise of my dog. This would also be the first time I flew in an airplane.

Florida has been just like queens in a sense, quiet and isolated up to a certain point. It was a good place for people to retire, just like my grandparents did.  However, the house of my grandparents was one of the most interesting places I have ever been to in my entire life. The house was like a small museum , full of many "TRophies".  My grandparents were Ex navy seals hitman, their mercenary career was the highlight of their lives. I stayed there for three years, enduring heavy training in the hopes that i would join the family business.  Once my mom found out that my grandparents were training me to be a skilled killer, she quickly took me back to queens and continued to apologize to me.

Years later, i turned  sixteen and made the choice of going back to my grandparents house. I was trained well for two more years and received my first mission. I was to join the air force and kill the incoming threat that was to happen a few months from now as a mole.  I wanted to maintain a low profile, and I wanted to work more on my mechanical skills, then I decided to join the Air Force. The ASVAB was definitely the toughest; I’m surprised I scored as high as I did to get in the Force.  Anyway, tinkering with things and reading philosophical books that my mom would send to me is the only thing that would keep me sane, so I made the most of my time. Another good thing about the air force was the fact that I was able to maintain my "quality of life" with the local dormitories and base housing units.  Nonetheless, the idea of having something akin to an apartment was attractive in my own right; I didn’t even have a roommate. My job wasn’t exactly an easy one, all I did was repair HH-60 helicopters with my fellow colleagues, and I took my own breaks. The location of the base was situated in Spain, quite a sight to behold if you never been there before.  Too bad I never actually spent a great deal of time off base; I was mostly a shut in when it came to things unrelated to work, but never missed a workout.

A few months have passed, and the  incident finally happened on my 19th Birthday. My base was compromised with an attempt to steal a few of our helicopters.  It sucked really; I was working on one in the back when I heard some gun shots. Not only were they trying to steal the helicopters, but kidnap the mechanics that worked on them. I didn’t understand most of the situation; I was mostly pondering my next course of action. I have never been in a fight before, but if I was to do nothing, the situation would only get worse.   I  underhandedly took down all of the insurgents, but an explosion happened and i lost consciousness.

Waking up into an infirmary, I saw a gentleman in a black suit next to my bedside. I was constantly questioned, and they shoved a lie down my throat. The whole entire altercation was made off to be a malfunction with the helicopters, and one explosion caused another. I was also dismissed from my duties, but still got paid  each month. It was hush money, but I didn’t complain. It was around this time I started to grow a little hatred for humanity, my government was built upon lies. Then an ex shield agent gave me something to believe in, and i joined him as an operative. That man's name was Lone Star.  I watched him for a while due to him being my idol, i still believed in him even after the incident in New Jersey. He's gone now, and nobody knows where he went.  But ill carry on his legacy, a fallen star only gives birth to a new light.... I am Renegade....



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PostSubject: Re: Jack Harper - Lone Star/ Renegade "Finished"   Mon Jun 30, 2014 12:40 am

Remove mentions of Tiers in your skills and everything is gucci.
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Harper - Lone Star/ Renegade "Finished"   Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:29 am

ur good mate.


give Ham a big kiss doe, many thanks to him

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