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PostSubject: Iorui Armisael [Done]   Thu Apr 24, 2014 2:25 am





IOURI ARMISAEL
"Start where you are. Use what you have.  Do what you can."


The Biography


Birth Name: Iouri Armisael
Aliases: EI3 ; Selection M
Gender: Male
Age: unknown
Birth Date: unknown
Class: Experiment

Appearance: Here before you stands an individual average general height, elevated only a meager five feet and seven inches ( one-hundred and seventy centimeters ). An interesting being to say the least, the male has a strange aura about him as if a clinging of a set emotion has radiated around his core through traumatic or otherwise similar circumstances. No matter the state in which such cause has taken place, young Iouri is slowly establishing himself as an individual and is upon the climb to one day achieve a higher positioning amongst his peers. Through appearance alone, most are quick to notice how he stands out. Unafraid of the use of cosmetics, face paints, and gender bending the very clothing he dawns. In his profession and specific specialties, such traits only assist in his over all performance. It attracts the eye, shifts the focus, and makes them susceptible to his glamours and wrongful allusions. Out of these attributes, the lining of his eyes and painting of his fingernails into a pale violet shade.

As the focus shifts to his garbs, more traditional articles are often seen. Feeling as if his lineage is (should) be of noble blood, the male does his best to reflect this. Due to such, he only wears the finest of cloths. His wardrobe is filled with silks, hemp, and linens of exceptional quality. This is the methods in which the male showcases his wealth (or at least crafts the illusion of such). Nearly all of his money is spent purchasing more. The collection he has amassed is greater than that required to fill his closet. To compensate, the male’s one-bedroom house has essentially turned into one while his living and sleeping area stays within his small living room. The price of beauty is costly but his lack of money prevents him from buying anything of a larger size. In the few times he is seen dressed casually, worker kimono still decorate his form. They generally are not of the same amazing quality, but serve their task nevertheless. While assigned on missions, he wears specific articles that have pockets sewn within the sleeves and the inner portions of the robes. This allows him to carry and utilize weaponry just the same as your perspective good looking psychopath.

When it comes to generalized appearance without the clothing, Iouri really appears nothing outside of your average male. Attributed towards his ancestry, the bastard-ized descendent has inherited his parents pale skin and soft blue eyes. His hair has taken moreso after his father, turning into a warm shade of freshly brewed coffee. Appreciating the outgrowth of keratin- Iouri maintains his hair quite diligently to benefit his role within is family. Keeping it fairly long and styled in a number of varieties- although the most common one is a simple ponytail. To maintain its length, he schedules routine bi-monthly appointments with his favourite cosmetologist. As for the rest of his anatomy, there truly isn’t much to describe. Spending his earnings mainly on clothing, his diet has lead him to thinning out more so than your average ninja. It is of such a quality that his ribs are visible should one ever be granted the permission to see his chest. Musculature is limited to light tone and definition. He certainly isn’t the strongest individual out there. Brain over Brawn essentially is his calling and he is very much aware of that. It easily reflects his combative styling.


Personality: Iouri  possess a rather remarkably personality in that he believes that he possesses the traits to rule, but knows that he doesn't have required stability for the task. He’s both prone to emotional instability, yet his resilience and determination are the very things that define his responses to these two failings. This very determination is often mistaken for outrageous arrogance and - it frequently is- an increasingly obvious superiority complex, however the male only does this out of his fundamental beliefs which are utterly malevolent - but that's a matter of perspective as he well knows.
Growing up relying primarily on his own mental and physical prowess has made him a bit insensitive and cold hearted when social sensibilities are in question. Bluntness when socially inappropriate, even to the point of being offensive do not terribly concern him. This personality of his makes Iouri seem to be an enormous, ‘dick’ for lack of any better word. Alas, this is just his outside personality. Like every other person, the onion of a mask he wears is near infinitely thick. By the same token, his knowledge of social interactions also makes him painfully aware of the toes he treads on when he speaks without pause for thought.

Few have ever gotten a sensitive remark from Iouri, and even fewer have received thanks from him. Now this may seem ungrateful, but Iouri doesn’t believe in giving people free gratitude. One must earn respect and attribution, rather than be given it out of pity or simple existence.

This may just seem like an excuse for his behaviour, however there is one other factor to add to the equation. His actual intelligence. Many in the world tend to look at things from a black, white grey and everything in between perspective. This is common in virtually all cases. It is what starts wars, and why the peace treaties last for only a short while - from a historical perspective. Iouri prides himself on being a man who sees only grey. No one is purely innocent and no one is purely guilty.
He realises the differences between cultures, understands what causes conflicts, and knows that nothing is ever just black and white. Many intelligent men have figured this out for themselves, but what distinguishes Iouri from the rest is his thought process and personal experience. Since he entered his teens, Iouri has been plagued by his unique cybernetic cognition. Being intimately familiar with nearly the entirety of information that humanity has bothered to record makes him a little single-minded in that regard.  It is not that he chooses to be an asshole, but rather, he has no choice.

However, Iouri is not at all a serious man. He may have serious emotional issues, and many strict codes of conduct, but he never acts this way. Around anyone for that matter. It is simply not the man he is. His ego and optimism are what contribute to his carefree and luxurious lifestyle. By having plentiful amounts of self determination, he simply has nothing to fear. Now, that’s not saying he has no fears. He does have those, but his only materialistic fear is that of insects. He does not even fear death, for he understands life is about accomplishing what one can while they are around, nostalgia over death is just another sign of weakness which he cannot behold. Now these other fears of his, are more revolved around him not finishing the task he has been given. This isn’t a shallow idea such as forgetting to sign a few peace treaties. No, this is on a fundamental level. Iouri’s greatest fear is that he won’t have enough time to accomplish his lifetime goals, and is the only thing that ever keeps him up at night. His insatiable fear of insects hardly comes close to paralleling this fear, even though he does go a bit psycho at the sight of bugs.
Unfortunately for the bugs, this isn't the, run away screaming psycho, it's more or less the fetish kind of psycho.

Now Iouri, is a very adventurous soul. Even since he was little, he loved travelling. . He is not at all a workaholic. In fact, Iouri devotes his weekends to simply partying, hooking up with girls, or attending local festivals just to have some fun. The man is so easygoing though, that he doesn’t even take serious threats, seriously- intimidation is also likely to fail. Many of his peers tend to hype up a situation beyond reasonable proportions, however Iouri is quick to notice these troublesome exaggerations, and is often times the first to call them out on their ignorance. He enjoys explaining philosophy, science and even politics to those who wish to listen.

Iouri typically to actually seems to have a soft side for, well, cute things. Whether it be adorably shaped pastries, cute animals or small people, he will simply fall in metaphorical love with them. When it comes to people, this weakness becomes even more evident. His captivation of adorable things makes him incredibly trusting of these very things, and could easily lead to his demise should an adorable assassin come and attempt to kill him. Even though he simply can’t say no to such things, he does have a brain. After only five or six backstabs will he finally realize the malicious intentions of this cute artifact. Since Iouri views malicious intentions to be very un-cute, the infatuation is usually lost, and the male has no remorse getting back at the foe.

As for his actual fighting personality, it’s not very different from his usual personality. When in combat with any regular foe, he’ll remain carefree and usually toy with his enemy, not really having any attempt to kill them. In fact, whenever he measures someone to be weaker than him, his main strategy is to simply ‘wait it out’. He knows that the enemy would have far more to prove, and would therefore try harder. Using a bit of psychology and manipulative words, Iouri usually attempts to force the enemy into overexerting by simply playing defensive and annoying. However, things become very different when he acknowledges a credible foe. The carefree attitude may show itself at the beginning, primarily to judge his enemy’s capabilities, however once their skillset is confirmed to be dangerous, he switches over to a more heartless set of tactics. His fighting style is incredibly bloody, though not in a literal sense. He’s just incredibly twisted mentally. He loves watching his enemies slowly suffer at his own hands, and will draw out a battle for as long as possible, simply to soak in their agony. Even when losing, Iouri will never try to simply win a fight. Instead, he will continue to torture his victims using all possible variables from within the environment.





The Capability
 


Specialties:

Main Specialty: Witty
Sub Specialty: Physical Prowess

Powers:

—Main Power: The Scriber of The World || Creativity knows no bounds. This power relies on the users limitless imagination when it comes to applications within the field. All users of this ability have a special item in which the /entirety/ of this ability is founded. most commonly a pen or writing utensil, that is otherwise quite useless. It will not even write with ink, and instead is used to have the mysterious power channelled through it in order to create words. Acting in a similar fashion to Solid Script, if the user wrote the word 'Fire', said word will take on properties of the thing it is describing. Sentences can be written, in the air or on a surface, which will spring to life and become what the words are saying. For example, the sentence 'A great gust howled' will bring about gales of wind. The user can utilise numerous elements of basic nature, and at higher levels of ability combine them to utilise advanced elements and interactions between them. With this magic, the main strength is that it really is limitless. As long as the wielder is able to think of new things to write and describe for their own uses, this magic will provide them with a medium of numerous types of attack, and supplementary purposes. Due to it being quite a scholarly magic, the user will have to be rather intelligent to use it, and as such the breadth of knowledge and strategy making is a very important pivotal point of the power. Because the manifestation of this power is so vital, if the user cannot scribe on the surface of reality to achieve the outcomes they desire. Without the pen, the user essentially is powerless. At lower applications of power, the user must inscribe his commandments onto physical surfaces, with higher rankings being able to find purchase on the air itself.

—Sup Power: TBA (1/2 Price)



Abilities:

Scriber of the World :
 


Skills:

—Name: The Boy Who Murdered Love
—Specialty: Witty
—Range: n/a
—Description: The person affected by this skill is a powerful speaker, with the capability to persuade, cajole and seduce. Their words are piercing and sharp, and those uneducated in the dangers of ideas are ripe targets for these talented individuals.

—Name: Can't touch this
—Specialty: Physical Prowess
—Range: n/a
—Description: Due in part to their training, or circumstances, the user of this skill is considered to be more agile then normal and has quicker reflexes but is not actually faster then the average. In this case, it allows the user to dodge strikes, attacks that normally they wouldn't be able to, moving up to 25% of the average movement speed.



Weapons/Devices:

Item Name: The Akkorokkamui's Pearl  
Item Range: Personal
Item Rank: C
Item Description: A simple red ear ring that dangles from Iouri's left appendage. This item is the second gift he received from the Akkorokamui and it is what allows him to communicate with the deity in times of need or when he wants some nonsensical conversation. However, the line is more then a little snowy at its current standard and does not offer any real offensive, defensive or even supplementary value as it stands at the moment. If one listens closely to it, then they can hear the tide surging in and out - waves crashing on the beach. Iouri is careful never to listen closely, for who knows what even the slightest amount of attention could bring?
Item Power: Just a creepy supernatural item. I'll pay silly amounts of Prestige for it later down the track.



The Background
 


History:
The sun burnt a heady beat upon the nape of the land, the continual orb of explosion was slowly descending 'neath the horizon. And in its wake, followed darkness. And within the darkness, many things lurk, stir and squirm. The Akkorokamui is one such of the creatures, a member belonging to the Parade of Weird, the Wonderful, and the Dead. Octopi are generally fond of the water, and so the congregation around the watering hole was not there entirely by chance. A number of mystical rituals, a couple of mistakes, a few rectifications and they were here - on the cusp of inducting a deity amongst their number. The dark haired woman in labour on the shore panted out a mixture of incantations and pained screams which added to the already gloomy, tense atmosphere. Everyone was focused on the surface of the water - but when the emergence of a small head began to appear. That was when the party started. Of course, arguably it wasn't a party for the affected individuals who were pulled into the lake. These were remarkably few in their number, but not so much for lack of trying by the part of the Akkorokamui, but more to do with the heady environment having already placed everyone on a hair's edge. Sucked down into the depths, however, the mother and her baby were. And so the de-facto-leader began to continue with the planned chanting and mumbling at the edge of the water - knees tucked under him, hands clasped in prayer. Whilst the water rumbled in front of him, vibrating ever so slightly as both the red in the sky was reflected on the peaceful surface of the water. And then, everything was quiet as the still form of a child floated up out of the water - uncut umbilical cord dragging up yet more floaty bits from below. Something that looked like a placenta bumped up against the boy whose slow shaking breaths seemed to be the only catalyst for movement in the world in those few moments. Wading cautiously into the water, kissing the tome on his neck as he did so - the priest retrieved the child from the water who opened a single red eye as he did so - his bright blonde hair contrasting sharply with the optic.
"Praise be with you," murmured the priest in his native tongue -whatever it was- and vacated the area swiftly.

Two years on, and Iouri progressed normally - or at least, as normally as could be considered possible for someone who'd been removed from his parents at such a young age. And had established a rapport with a minor demon, but for the most part Iouri was a normal child. He enjoyed the company of others his age, liked to play, didn't like to sleep and most certainly didn't like questions about his parents. He played to forget, he played to become someone else, even if only for a little while. However his involvement with the Akkorokamui did not stop at childbirth, as once the creature had found something of interest - its grip did not easily loosen. But it was a patient creature and waited. Because there are rules that must be obeyed in respect to these things but to those with a will a way often shows itself. And for a patient watcher, for whom 10 years is the blink of an eye - especially so. But when opportunity took shape, the Akkorokamui did not let it slip away.

Blood was pooling from the fallen figure of his friend, the young boy of twelve who had taken to wearing an eye-patch to cover up his deformity knelt down beside him, the words catching in his breath. Sobs barely making it out of his lungs as he choked them down with anger. And still the mobster postured above him, asking for the money. What money? His best friend, the only person who he'd managed to make a lasting connection to lay before him - the sound of his last few breaths gurgling away as his lungs filled with blood. There was no saving her. But...there might be the possibility of revenge. How easy it would be to strike now, while his guard was down. To swipe his own blade across the man's throat. No sooner had the thought occurred, then he was on in pursuit of that goal. His ambitious outweighed his ability, and soon he found himself bleeding from one leg, pressed up against the wall, the man's sweaty face laughing at him. And still, he gave no ground - Iouri searched for anything, something to use. To turn the tide. In his blind frenzy, he almost couldn't feel the Akkorokamui's offer. But when he smelt the sea breeze, despite the lack of proximity to the ocean, felt the rushing of water around him - he accepted it. A minute later, Iouri lay panting in a corner, dark shapes converging on his body. The assailant was scattered across the alley, blood painting the walls. Staggering upright, Iouri started to make his way home. And then, there was only the sound of silence.


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PostSubject: Re: Iorui Armisael [Done]   Sun Jun 15, 2014 12:44 am

Done. Been a while since I did this.
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PostSubject: Re: Iorui Armisael [Done]   Sun Jun 15, 2014 5:08 am

First off, the templates have been changed, so if you could turn this template into the new one, that would be great.

Secondly, for the Water Manipulation ability, it seems like this is used to just make objects from water and condensed water, but it is a bit unclear on if it can do anything else because of how the first part is worded. Can it do anything else than make objects out of water?

The Physiology ability, what does it do exactly? Does it heal you? That's a single ability, also, I would say intense healing like an entire limb in a few posts would be limited to just your tentacle arms. Does it allow you to spew ink? That's a single ability. You can produce tentacles from your body? That's a single ability, and you would need to describe the length and uses of the tentacles, if they can do things other than just extra arms.

Your Agility skill says that it doesn't increase your movement speed, then says it increases your movement speed and ability to dodge. Please clarify. I would suggest that you mention that when evading techniques, you get double the speed. Outside of evading, you'd get 25% extra speed.

Everything else looks amazing.

EDIT Totally typo'd on there, the mps were fine as you had them, site wise, but making you double the speed is a bit much for a passive skill.
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PostSubject: Re: Iorui Armisael [Done]   Mon Jun 16, 2014 9:24 pm

Edits made.

Water Manip can currently only making objects out of water yes, clarified it a little.

Only got Tentacle Generation for that Power now.

Agility Buff is 25%.
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PostSubject: Re: Iorui Armisael [Done]   Tue Jun 17, 2014 1:21 am

NEW SKILL INFO HERE



Alright, good news and bad news. There has been a new ruling within Staff that has limited Physiologies in a way. If you wish to have the Physiology power, you must only have that Physiology, no other powers(so it doesn't matter what race you are). Then, under your physiology power, you will list every power under that Physiology, and those powers get a -1 to all upgrades, and you must take the weakness/es of the physiology as well.

The benefit to this, is that you get access to everything that the Physiology has, and only at a -1 to upgrades. Meaning, you will get every damned power on that wiki page, but you can only ever have those powers. That 1 Main Power is it, but any ability you make that has to do with any of these:

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Is good to go. So please edit accordingly, whether you want to keep the physiology and lose access to the other powers, or if you want to change the physiology. This also means that you'll be weak to things designed to bring down supernatural beings, and most likely you'll need to keep constantly hydrated.

If you require any more information on this, Physiology rules have been added HERE.
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PostSubject: Re: Iorui Armisael [Done]   Fri Jun 27, 2014 9:27 pm

Guess I'll stick with the Phys since I have no idea what else to do.

Edits made.
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PostSubject: Re: Iorui Armisael [Done]   Sat Jul 12, 2014 2:38 am

First off, sorry so late on this

Thirsty Son Flaw - this needs to be a tangible nerf to yourself, such as -1 rank to your abilities or severe exhaustion, not just migraines.

Name: Cut and come again - Branch means anything except lethal wounds, so make sure that decapitation and such can still kill you. Also, regeneration can't be passive, regenerative healing factor is passive, and is restricted(Under Spontaneous Regeneration). Just put that it isn't passive, this might come into play later with a cool down system.

Name: If I don't bleed, can you kill me? - Octopi and the like don't have denser, tougher bodies, in fact this is the opposite. This could be said that your internal organs are tougher, and your skin softens up the damage from them, but you still have to heal the flesh.

Also, how much prestige do you have? It says around 420, but you spent a lot more than that on your abilities.

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PostSubject: Re: Iorui Armisael [Done]   Sat Jul 12, 2014 3:17 am

Ignore this for now, as the D/B class is closed so I'll be revamping the character.

Letcha know later on when I'm done.
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