Prestige review with constructive comments. Feel free to PM with any comments, questions or concerns.
Length: 2
Relatively short.
English:
Drake Archer [Drake] - 5
Emelie Romskaug [Confused] - 4
Watch out for homophones and repeated words and you'll be golden.
Quality of Story: 2
If you'd expanded on the exchange more - a woman coming down out of nowhere to help - I would have definitely given more. It was a bit too abrupt but entertaining.
Quality of Writing:
Drake Archer [Drake] - 9
Very nice writing style but posts were on the shorter side.
Emelie Romskaug [Confused] - 7
Great that you want to describe actions but feels rushed in shorter posts.
Total:
Drake Archer [Drake] - 2+5+2+9 = 18
Emelie Romskaug [Confused] - 2+4+2+7 = 15