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Senator Hines has revealed how mutants will be handled: Sentinels.

A rumor traveled the circles of the supernatural. Mutants heard a safe, underground railroad was being started, inquire at the Summit. The beyond sought the strange power said to rest at the Summit of New York City. The gossip flitted amongst the rest: valuable information was to come to light when dawn broke over the Summit.
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PostSubject: Something Wicked This Way Comes [Prestige]   Tue Jan 01, 2013 10:01 pm

Topic Name: Something Wicked This Way Comes
Topic Link: Something Wicked This Way Comes
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Devon Hadden [TheTempest] - [Mutants]
Samael Smith [Samael] - [Deity Touched]

Topic Description: Samael stalks a coed at GWU, finding a rapist and demands his confession. Devon stumbles upon the scene, thinking it at first a violent confrontation. A confrontation of moral and ethical implications ensues as emotions come to bare.
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PostSubject: Re: Something Wicked This Way Comes [Prestige]   Thu Jan 03, 2013 5:10 pm

Bumping.
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PostSubject: Re: Something Wicked This Way Comes [Prestige]   Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:55 pm

Length: 2
English: 5
Quality of Story: 2
Quality of Writing:
Tempest 8
Samael 9
Faction: 0

Devon Hadden [TheTempest] - 17
Samael Smith [Samael] - 18

Bro Mutants touched and such aren't a Faction, A faction would be like H.A.M.M.E.R. or a group you joined.
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PostSubject: Re: Something Wicked This Way Comes [Prestige]   Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:06 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Something Wicked This Way Comes [Prestige]   Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:34 pm

Can I have more detail on the grading for each aspect? I've read the Guide, but I'm unclear as to the judging criteria. Specifically, I feel like this isn't enough. I'll also admit to feeling I'm better than these gradings.

Of note are the following:

Length

Something Wicked was longer than Today's Forecast but received less for length.

Quality of Story

I expected more for quality of story considering the implications of the confrontation, at least more than what Today's Forecast got yet they both got 2 out of 15.

Quality of Writing

Here I have great concern.

Guidelines: "Quality of Writing: This was the quality of writing. Our angry villain, Mr. Bald put up a sad show, his alter ego/secret identity only wrote a small paragraph each go around, so Mr. Bald only gained 7/20 Writing prestige. meanwhile, Captain Hygienes secret identity type person, wrote 5 or 6 detailed paragraphs on average, and made a nice hefty 17 out of 20 Max."

I would like to know the basis of my 8, especially if 7 is "only wrote a small paragraph" where 17 is "wrote 5 or 6 detailed paragraphs on average."

Conclusion

Either I'm way off or the guidelines need revamping. Either way I would be very appreciative of a more detailed response if only to 1) soothe my ego and 2) get constructive criticism.

Thank you.
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PostSubject: Re: Something Wicked This Way Comes [Prestige]   Fri Jan 04, 2013 12:54 am


Length: 7
English: 5
Quality of Story: 4
Quality of Writing:
Tempest 11
Samael 10
Faction: 0

Devon Hadden [TheTempest] - 17 to 27
Samael Smith [Samael] - 18 to 26
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PostSubject: Re: Something Wicked This Way Comes [Prestige]   Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:01 am

added 9 to Sam and 10 to Devon
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