Crowley(Otherworldly) Completed

The Biography

Birth Name: Green Horn Aliases: Crowley Gender: Male Age: 400(Appears to be 21) Birth Date: 2/14/ 1613 Class: C Appearance: Personality: Crowley is arrogant but not cocky. He is very calm, and tends to act funny. He tends also to act like a Gentlemen.And he speaks with an English Accent. However, he speaks in broken English dis-pelt being English. Some what making it hard to understand him. He is however Very patience man.

The Capability

Rank: Specialties: —Main Specialty:[/b ]Projection —[b]Sub Specialty: Physical Prowess Powers: —Main Power: Demonic Magic —Main Power: Archdemon Physiology(Path of Satan) —Main Power:(Leave blank until B-Level) —Sub Power:(Leave Blank Until A-Level) —Sub Power:(Leave Blank Until A-Level) Abilities:(1 Free C-Level ability at Creation per power) —Name: Darkness Manipulation —Rank: E-S(It's C Level) —Power: Archdemon Physiology(Path of Satan) —Description: The user can create, control, manipulate, materialize and summon darkness,often by accessing a dimension of dark energy which can be channeled to a variety of effects, both as an absence of light and a solid substance: one can also control and manipulate the beings that exist there, create and dispel shields and areas of totlal darkness, create a variety of constructs and weapons and, teleport one's self through massive distances via shadows. One can also use the dark energy within the dimension to dispel the darkness as blast of energy, granting the user a variety offensive abilities. While the darkness itself is a powerful element, it can be merged with other elemental forces to create a dark side of a selected element for greater effect in offensive and defensive capabitlies. —Name: —Rank: —Power: —Description: Skills: —Name: Taekwondo —Specialty: Physical Prowess —Rank: C —Description: Has Skills of a 4th Degree Black Belt in Taekwondo Weapons/Devices:(2 D-Level weapons if you have weaponry spec if not you start with none) Item Name: Item Rank: Item Description: (What it looks like) Patent: (If you or someone else has this item patented) Item Image: (Not necessary) Item Power: (What the Item does) Item Name: Item Rank: Item Description: (What it looks like) Patent: (If you or someone else has this item patented) Item Image: (Not necessary) Item Power: (What the Item does)

The Background

History: Crowley was born at Demon On in 1613, and takes appearance of a 21 year old boy. He has spent time in Hell, fighting and battle for power ever since he was spawn from the hell's pit. Whether it be following, leading, Commanding, fighting, Etc. His done it since 1613. Most events that happened in his life was annoyed troublesome. For Instance He has been Fighting Angels, For 100 years. Whether it be Losing, Winning, Getting Hurt, or Hurting them. His been the Underdog and most of the sometimes Prevailed. There has been times where he had met face to face with an Archangel Michael that is who had warned him if he continued to rebel he would be smited from this realm. Shaking in his boots by Michael's Threat, Greenhorn went out and seeked his Leader, Satan, the Archdemon, who offered him something greater. To Become his replacement as an Archdemon, being the the Power Hungry Demon he was he accepted, and so for the next 300 Years his been training, and has been converted into a Archdemon his himself, and renamed to Crowley. Taken the Path of Satan.

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First off you need place your rank, which is C rank.

Add words to your appearance

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—Main Specialty:[/b ]Projection
—[b]Sub Specialty: Physical Prowess

fix that, you don't have to, but the random b looks weird.

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Age: 300(Appears to be 21)
Birth Date: 2/14/ 1613

He'd be 399 years old to be dated to today.

Both of your powers are fine

You get two abilities one in each of your powers, you already have one but add the other.

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—Name: Darkness Manipulation
—Rank: E-S(It's C Level)
—Power: Archdemon Physiology(Path of Satan)
—Description: The user can create, control, manipulate, materialize and summon darkness,often by accessing a dimension of dark energy which can be channeled to a variety of effects, both as an absence of light and a solid substance: one can also control and manipulate the beings that exist there, create and dispel shields and areas of totlal darkness, create a variety of constructs and weapons and, teleport one's self through massive distances via shadows. One can also use the dark energy within the dimension to dispel the darkness as blast of energy, granting the user a variety offensive abilities.

While the darkness itself is a powerful element, it can be merged with other elemental forces to create a dark side of a selected element for greater effect in offensive and defensive capabitlies.

Way to much crap for a C ranked ability. Go look at the branching chart, then add what you want. Its a application of your power not a wide variety.

https://marvelunlimited.forumotion.com/t126-important-branching-powers. Thats a base line for you, also I'd scrap that ability, its got too much. Try and pick one thing and go with that, as long as it follows branching rules and isn't to OP. As you rank up things change.