Someone Train me

Can Someone Train me please?

Sure, I'll toss up a quick post and get on with it.

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South wandered into the arena, his stance low and wide, prepared for some combat of the more hand-to-hand nature. His clothes were that of your typical man might wear to a day off, khaki shorts, a long sleeved button up t-shirt and jogging shoes with ankle socks.

Pretty basic post, described what I'm wearing and my mental/physical condition.

South is wearing his everyday gear where he handout with his friend. Mentaly he look Pump and ready to go. And physicaly he going to let the other dude get the first hit

Jaden Banner wrote:

South is wearing his everyday gear where he handout with his friend. Mentaly he look Pump and ready to go. And physicaly he going to let the other dude get the first hit

Righto, firstly, let's look at your timing. When you say 'pump', I think you you mean 'pumped,'. Watch your timing, I cannot stress this enough in RP combat. Timing is everything, in jokes and in writing.

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Allowing his head to tilt with acknowledgement to his opponent, South darted forwards, his body quickly slipping into a swift sprint that covered the distance between them in a flash. Feinting towards a full on punch, South abruptly veered away from the oncoming collision, and jumped upwards, turning into what had looked like a full-out punch into a reverse round house kick.

South doesn't have any special abilities, but it doesn't stop me from being tricky about how I go about things.

Jaden Got Hit From the kick from South. He fall in the floor. But He stand Up, Point at South and Jump into the Air For a Flying Side Kick in the Air.

Jaden Banner wrote:

Jaden Got Hit From the kick from South. He fall in the floor. But He stand Up, Point at South and Jump into the Air For a Flying Side Kick in the Air.

Just curious, but why the odd capitalisation of words? Are you posting from a phone or something similar?
Not going to capitalise on it, but why point at me? Think about what actions you take in battle. For example, pointing at me would give South time to dash forwards or backwards and close the distance again while you're doing that action. It's like talking.

The second part of your post contains you jumping into the air. It doesn't make any mentioned of any actual movement towards South so that there is momentum behind it. But meh, here is my response.

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As the blow connected, South flipped forwards, turning his landing into a roll to prevent himself from being hit from behind by a retaliatory blow.
He allowed his form to go through some more revelations before coming to a halt by standing up and spinning around, the distance between them enough to avoid the kick from Jaden. Sprinting forwards again, South moved to land a spear tackle on the man who would only just be coming down from his movement.

Jaden came down hard from that attack. But he stand up holding his ribs with his right hand and rush South. He Runing to South For a RoundHouse Kick.