Length: 4
English:
Kiyoshi? [+B] - [N/A][0 Mission prestige] - 5
Gai Gun [Gai Gun] - [N/A][0 Mission Prestige] - 5
NPC [ Kana] - [N/A] [35 Mission prestige] - 5
Quality of Story: 5 Heroes gunned down..Villains win for once o.o
Quality of Writing:
You guys could have done better here, but since all of you were consistent and on the same level I gave some leeway
Kiyoshi? [+B] - [N/A][0 Mission prestige] - 8
Gai Gun [Gai Gun] - [N/A][0 Mission Prestige] - 8
NPC [ Kana] - [N/A] [35 Mission prestige] - 8
Faction: N/A
Total:
Kiyoshi? [+B] - [N/A][0 Mission prestige] - 22
Gai Gun [Gai Gun] - [N/A][0 Mission Prestige] - 22
NPC [ Kana] - [N/A] [35 Mission prestige] - 22 + 17 = 39