Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective]
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order]
NPC - [Skyscraper] Richard Hinnes
Length: 4
English:
Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 5
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 5
NPC - [Skyscraper] - 5
Quality of Story: 5 Mission with a plot behind it
Quality of Writing:
Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 9
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 9
NPC - [Skyscraper] - 5 Small responses without any kinda detail to back it. Not really any inclusion of character personality either. Not even one mention of the "Chirps during attacking" deal.
Faction:
The Collective - 4
The Order - 4
Total:
Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 23 + 20 = 43
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 23 + 20 = 43
NPC - [Skyscraper] 19 + 10 = 29