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Senator Hines has revealed how mutants will be handled: Sentinels.

A rumor traveled the circles of the supernatural. Mutants heard a safe, underground railroad was being started, inquire at the Summit. The beyond sought the strange power said to rest at the Summit of New York City. The gossip flitted amongst the rest: valuable information was to come to light when dawn broke over the Summit.
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PostSubject: Chirping in the Night [Prestige]   Sun Oct 07, 2012 11:25 pm

Topic Name: Chirping in the Night
Topic Link: Chirping in the Night
Topic Participants:

Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective]
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order]



Topic Description: Alternate Universes and fast kids.

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PostSubject: Re: Chirping in the Night [Prestige]   Mon Oct 08, 2012 10:32 pm

Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective]
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order]
NPC - [Skyscraper] Richard Hinnes

Length: 4
English:

Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 5
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 5
NPC - [Skyscraper] - 5

Quality of Story: 5 Mission with a plot behind it

Quality of Writing:

Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 9
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 9
NPC - [Skyscraper] - 5 Small responses without any kinda detail to back it. Not really any inclusion of character personality either. Not even one mention of the "Chirps during attacking" deal.

Faction:

The Collective - 4

The Order - 4

Total:

Donnille Hines [Lone Star] - [The Collective] - 23 + 20 = 43
Jesteria [Jesteria] - [The Order] - 23 + 20 = 43
NPC - [Skyscraper] 19 + 10 = 29
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