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PostSubject: Skyscraper   Sat Oct 06, 2012 10:00 am


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The Biography


Birth Name:Richard Harrison Hines
Aliases:Skyscraper
Gender:Male
Age:16
Birth Date:9/9
Class:Human

Appearance:
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Skyscraper, with hood off
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Even Though Skyscraper usually is hooded. He has golden blonde hair, with one side spiked up as if it was windswept. He also has blue eyes. He stands at 5'8 weighing about 175 pounds. He has a good build, but isn't as muscle bound as most superheroes, he prefers a slender build for his style of combat to maintain high mobility. He usually wears a black hood most of the time during fights to hide his face from any and every one. It only comes down if he chooses to reveal his identity to who he trusts or he thinks deserves to learn it or if he is hit hard enough that it falls down. Under his hood, if he ever chooses to take it off is shorts and a t shirt.

Personality:Skyscarper doesn't suffer from depression, but is never really happy. Due to his bring up, he really doesn't have much to be happy about. Plus his assassin training lead to him being able to contain his emotions during a mission in order to kill without sympathies. He shows sign of anger when his father and mother are referred to. Basically, he doesn't show too much emotion. He however, does have a soft spot for young children, and tends to help them whenever they are in need. But, if no one is getting hurt in a situtation, he tends to stay away from it.


The Capability


Rank:C

Specialties:

    Main Specialty:Weapons Expert
    Sub Specialty:Physical Prowess
    Sub Specialty:Hunter


Profession

    Official Career: Mercenary
    Hobby Career: Bounty Hunter



Skills:

    Name:Enhanced Swordsmanship
    Specialty:Weapons Expert
    Rank:C
    Description:Through vigorous training, Skyscraper is proficient in the use of a blade.

    Name:Martial Arts
    Specialty:Physical Prowess
    Rank:C
    Description:Skyscraper specializes in several martial arts, focusing on his agility and speed to fight and dodge attacks. His style of Martial Arts is Manji Ninjutsu Arts.

    Name:Apathy
    Specialty:Hunter
    Rank:D
    Description:He has the ability to suppress and negate his emotions, positive or negative.

    Name:Tracking
    Specialty:Hunter
    Rank:D
    Description:Skyscraper is an expert assassin, and is an expert at investigating and using clues to track down and hunt targets.

    Name:Stealth Tactics
    Specialty:Hunter
    Rank:C
    Description:Skyscraper specalizes in stealth, using shadows and other various objects to hide and stalk targets.

    Name:Enhanced Agility
    Specialty:Physical Prowess
    Rank:C
    Description:Skyscraper has trained his body to human peaks boosting his agility, allowing him to run up to 14 MPH, makes his attacks faster, and can make movements faster.

    Skill Name:Escape Artistry
    Skill Specialty:Hunter
    Skill Rank:C
    Skill Description:
    The user mind deductively analyzes knots, fetters, bonds, etc in order to assist in breaking out of various traps that immobilize him. It helps escape traps that are ranked lower then him.

    Skill Name:Enhanced Aiming
    Skill Specialty:Weapons Expert
    Skill Rank:C
    Skill Description:While Skyscraper's Brother and father are expert marksman, he is somewhat good at it. He is no where near as close as them but he is quite good at it. He has the ability to focus on a target, and use various projectiles to try and make contact with it. He has the aim of maybe a major league pitcher at his current level. He mainly uses kunai or shuriken as his projectiles. He has no sense of aim with fire arms.


    Skill Name:Enhanced Sight
    Skill Specialty:Hunter
    Skill Rank:C
    Skill Description:Users have eyes enhanced to see with amazing clarity, distance, or color. User can perceive things in a more detailed manner.


    Skill Name:Enhanced Tracking
    Skill Specialty:Hunter
    Skill Rank:C
    Skill Description:The user can track others down easily via footprints, tracks, and fingerprints.


Weapons/Devices: (2 C-levels with weaponry Spec, 2 D-levels without it)

    Item Name:Chandrahasa
    Item Rank:C
    Item Description:A sword, with a red handle, and a silver blade. Skyscraper's first blade and his own default weapon.
    Patent:Nope
    Item Image:http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120220043550/ninjagaiden/images/thumb/f/fb/TrueDragonSword.png/185px-TrueDragonSword.png
    Item Power:Just Whatever a sword does, Cut, stab, slash.



    Item Name:Iron Bo Staff
    Item Rank:C
    Item Description: A staff, a long pole about 3 feet long made of iron.
    Patent:Nope
    Item Image:
    Item Power: A bo staff used in combat by swinging spinning and various other uses.

    Item Name:Smoke Pellet
    Item Rank:C
    Item Description: a small pellet.
    Patent: (If you or someone else has this item patented)
    Item Image: (Not necessary)
    Item Power:If thrown onto a solid surface, it generates a large amount of smoke to mask the user's actions or another person's actions. The smoke strethes out to fifteen meters and he carries 3 at once.

    Item Name:Firecrackers
    Item Rank:C
    Item Description: a small, battery shaped cylinder shaped object.
    Patent: (If you or someone else has this item patented)
    Item Image: (Not necessary)
    Item Power: After throwing it on the ground it explodes making a loud sound and a bright flash. Causing small sight and hearing loss for a post and can stun targets. When the firecrackers go off they pretty much only let the user see some of the silhouettes of people and other objects and they lose the abilities to hear quieter sounds like footsteps or breathing.


Item Name:Hidden Blade
Item Rank:C
Item Description: A hidden blade hidden under the sleeve under Skyscraper's hood that can be extended past the hand for sleathly assassinations or unexpected surprise stabs or slashes.
Patent: (If you or someone else has this item patented)
Item Image:
Item Power: It's a hidden blade under the sleeve connected to a bracer worn on the hand. A ring is worn on the finger and when the finger pulls with the force needed, the hidden blade shall be extended or retracted.

Item Name:Magnum Revolver
Item Rank:C
Item Description: A pistol used for close range. While ineffective in mid or long range, in close range, the magnum revolver can be quite useful. It is reloaded by twisting the revolver on it, it contains 6 bullets per clip.
Patent: (If you or someone else has this item patented)
Item Image:
Item Power: A revolver used in close range.


The Background


History:Growing up, Rick was always yelled at that he is the reason his father left them by his mother. She blames him for her whole life going bad and constantly abused him, mentally and physically. Rick simply ran away at age 6 and never came back. On the street, he begged for money until one day, an old man decided to adopt him. Little did he know the old man was the leader of an assassin's clan. A Clan, responsible for killing various dictators or people who they thought the world would improve if they were to die.

Skyscraper retired from the clan, and went solo. He went on a search for his father, Aaron Hines, to get revenge for all the sorrow he has caused him. On the way, he found out he does have a half brother named Donnille Hines, but he has never had the chance to meet him just yet. When Skyscraper finally meet his father, he attempted to strike him. Little did he know, his father was much stronger, and end up defeating Skyscraper in combat.

He was held captive as his prisoner, where he was tortured daily for three months straight, where during a daily torture. Skyscraper go the upper hand and escaped, ever since then he has dedicated to find his brother and killing his father for everything that has occurred in his life. He took on the alias Skyscraper and has covered his face with a hood to hide his face, because every time he looks in the mirror, he sees an image of his father and it makes him sick.


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PostSubject: Re: Skyscraper   Sat Oct 06, 2012 1:06 pm

A human starts with Four C rank skills and two D rank skills.

Your skills need alot more detail and clarity.

—Name:Martial Arts
—Specialty:Physical Prowess
—Rank:C
—Description:Skyscraper specializes in several martial arts, focusing on his agility and speed to fight and dodge attacks.

Choose a martial art. You can't just have multiple all under one. So make one, or use an actual real martial arts style.

—Name:Enhanced Assassination
—Specialty:Hunter
—Rank:C
—Description:Skyscraper is trained in the arts of assassination, an expert at killing.

So what does this do? It needs alot more detail.

—Name:Weapon Proficiency
—Specialty:Weapons Expert
—Rank:C
—Description:Skyscraper is a specalisit in several different weapons, proficient at them all.

You need to focus on a certain type of weaponry at a time. Not be proficient in all of them with a basic C rank skill.

—Name:Enhanced Condition
—Specialty:Physical Prowess
—Rank:C
—Description:Skyscraper has trained his body to human peaks, with high agility, speed, stamina, climbing ability

This would not all be under one skill. These are separate skills.
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PostSubject: Re: Skyscraper   Sat Oct 06, 2012 2:55 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Skyscraper   Sat Oct 06, 2012 4:36 pm

The skills are still very vague and may need to be relooked at, but approved. This may be on saturday laziness.
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