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PostSubject: Jack Sights   Sun Sep 30, 2012 9:04 pm


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The Biography


Birth Name:Jack Sights
Aliases:Thief Raccoon
Gender:male
Age:20
Birth Date:07/07
Class:Mutant

Appearance:
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jack is a raccoon that has brown and black fur ring tail under his outfit his chest fur is white and he wears a ninja outfit and arm guard and and a black mask the outfit also has a hood.

Personality:jack love stealing and robing from people who has lots of cash on them if there is a high tech security system jack can easily get by it with out setting it off he is a expert thief and almost no one knows who he is since he was never caught.


The Capability


Rank:C

Specialties:

    Main Specialty:Hunter
    Sub Specialty:witty


Powers:

    Main Power:Ninjutsu
    Sub Power:(Leave Blank Until A-Level)


Abilities:(1 Free C-Level ability at Creation)

    Name:Ninja vanish
    Rank:C
    Power:Ninjutasu
    Description:This list Jack vanish and hide in the shadows he becomes the shadows to hide from the naked eye as long as he stand still and dont move he can remain in the dark and out of sight



Skills:

    Name:Hawk eye
    Specialty:Hunter
    Rank:D
    Description:This increase's his eye sight so he can see object more clearly and about 20 feet in length so he can fallow his target and watch them closely he has 15/20


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Name:Night vision
Specialty:Hunter
Rank:D
Description:this lets jack see in dark places


    Name:
    Specialty:
    Rank:
    Description:



    Name:
    Specialty:
    Rank:
    Description:



    Name:(Leave blank until A-Level)
    Specialty:
    Rank:
    Description:


Weapons/Devices:(2 D-Level weapons if you have weaponry spec if not you start with none)

    Item Name:Thieving Cane
    Item Rank: D
    Item Description:A cane that have a hook on it use for pick pocketing people and stealing without being notice
    Patent:jack sights only
    Item Image:look at main pic
    Item Power:normal cane



    Item Name:
    Item Rank:
    Item Description: (What it looks like)
    Patent: (If you or someone else has this item patented)
    Item Image: (Not necessary)
    Item Power: (What the Item does)



The Background


History:Jack spice was a human who was experimenting on a raccoon to help under stand them in his private lab one day when he was running a ray that was a prototype ray that he got from Oscorp on the raccoon it soon back fired on him and instead of of him getting info on the Raccoon It fused the raccoon with his body thought mutating his body with the raccoon this was a slow transformation and it took him weaks of hiding it once the transformation finish his body and mind was fused with the animal and he was a walking talking raccoon because he was weird the residents of the city he lived him kick him out and he ran to the woods, there he meet he meet a man who was a old ninja and he saw that jack was a raccoon and decided told him people will judge him base on his looks and the only way he can get around the place is too home his raccoon skills and learn ninjutsu.


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PostSubject: Re: Jack Sights   Mon Oct 01, 2012 11:25 pm

So, I'd appreciate it if you capitalized your words Smile. And used punctuation. And used words in their past tense.

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—Name:Ninja vanish
—Rank:C
—Power:Ninjutasu
—Description:This list Jack vanish and hide in the shadows he becomes the shadows to hide from the naked eye as long as he stand still and dont move he can remain invisible
What do you mean by this? As in he is able to blend in better with the dark or he completely vanishes?

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—Name:Hawk eye
—Specialty:Hunter
—Rank:D
—Description:This increase's his eye sight so he can see object more clearly and about 500 feet in length so he can fallow his target and watch them closely
I did not understand that at all.

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—Name:Night vision
—Specialty:Hunter
—Rank:D
—Description:this lets jack see in dark places and lets him see red invisible laser lights
Enhanced vision in the dark, maybe. Seeing invisible lasers? No.


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PostSubject: Re: Jack Sights   Mon Oct 01, 2012 11:40 pm

for ninja vanish he blends into darkness

for hawkeye his eyes can zoom in on objects

and i can remove the laser thing for night vision
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Sights   Mon Oct 01, 2012 11:51 pm

Ok, Night Vision is ok now. If you could please clarify with the other issues.

Enhanced Vision would be like 15/20 vision at D rank. At 20 feet you see as well as a regular person could see at 20 feet. That would then improve with each rank up.

The vanishing thing would be stealth. Just simply put that he is able to remain undetected by sight while hidden in the dark.

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PostSubject: Re: Jack Sights   Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:28 am

done
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Sights   Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:36 pm

Your abilities are vague I need them to be a lot more discriptive. If you need examples look at some of the approved profiles.
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