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PostSubject: Marcus Stone(Mutant)   Wed Sep 26, 2012 10:01 pm


Marcus Stone
”I will only kill if there no other way.”
"If there a will there a way."



The Biography


Birth Name: Marcus Stone
Aliases: Dracoling, Ash Wyvern
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Birth Date: 20/05/1991
Class: Mutant

Appearance:
Normal.
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Dragon Physiology full form.
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Standing at 190cm tall when human and when fully dragon out he stands at 3 metres tall.
He also has scars on him one on his face from a hunting mishap that take the shape of a star and one on his left arm that spirals around it from a fight were his arm got caught in razor wire.

Personality:

Marcus is usually calm all the time it very hard to get him angry at all but when you do well lets just say you don’t want to see the aftermath of a rampaging dragon. Other then that he is very caring and will go to great lengths to protect the ones that he calls friends and family he even give his life if that what it takes. He also kill but that any as a last resort if anything he tries to talk his way out of thing first but he can be a very hard foe to take done thanks to his mutant powers.

There are things that he likes like video games, pasta, chocolate and girls. then there are things that he hate like bullies and people that use their given power for their own needs. So he do anything to stop those type of people within reason. Stubbornness like a mule is not even close to how he can be sometimes so once his mind is set he is very, very hard to change his mind by any means.

When Marcus is fighting he more of a thinker and planner and he deadly in a long fight for he can figure out how most moves and powers work and think of a way around them if he sees them a few times. He also the not very talkative when he fighting for he see that as a waste of breath what he says has some sort of weight to it.


The Capability


Rank: C

Specialties:

    Main Specialty: Physical Powess
    Sub Specialty: Hunting


Powers:

    Main Power: Dragon Physiology
    Due to having Dragon Physiology have the ability to harness all the powers of a dragon with some limits but most will follow branching table.


    Sub Power:(Leave Blank Until A-Level)


Abilities:(1 Free C-Level ability at Creation)

    Name: Life-force constructs
    Rank: C+
    Power: Dragon Physiology
    Description: Can make any object the user can think of out of their life-force energy. Since this is a power that Marcus is still learning to use he limited to how many constructs he can make at a time. Also if he tries to go beyond the size limit then it will feel like someone grabing his life force and choking him though it. Also he uses his life-force and left over nature life force in no way can he use other people life force. the size limit to this is 3 metre long with the max width being a metre. so he can only make hand hold weapons and tools which have the same breaking point as Titanium. most hunting gear he can make as if they are really there not made out of life-force there for they will work the same as their real counterparts. anything that not hunting gear and is not just smiple it make up takes time to make (2 to 4 posts depending on how complex it is say a laptop that will take 4 posts to get a perfect copy of it. A kantana on the other hand since it simple but the blade is complex in layers it will take 2 post to make a perfect copy.) once they are made it like a living part of Marcus and he has little control to change them but for small things like sharpness and what not. If any of them do break it be like a small local explodsion happens like that of a middle size firework going off (A bottle rocket but more a like to the old ancient china fireworks that use a mortar like tube as a launcher.) Some if they are in the 2 meter range of the explodsion then they will get light burns and cut if not then it will not hurt them.
    C-Rank 3 constructs
    B-Rank 5 constructs
    A-Rank 10 constructs
    S-Rank 30 constructs



Skills:

    Name: Predators Instincts
    Specialty: ] Physical Powess
    Rank: C
    Description: By using the instincts of a Predator Marcus can syc with his opponent body rhythm gaining a small insight in what they are going to do next and therefor being able to block it or dodge it easy as pie. This gives a 10% boost to reflexes.



    Name: Rolling with the punches
    Specialty: Physical Powess
    Rank: C
    Description: Due to a slightly rough childhood Marcus has learnt how to roll with punches or other attacks that are melee to reduce the damage done to him. A reduction to melee damage by 10%



    Name: Skilled Hunter
    Specialty: Hunting
    Rank: D
    Description: Due to being with parents that loved nature so much he has learnt the fine art of hunting down prey with just his senses to a very high level.



    Name: In tune with nature
    Specialty: Hunting
    Rank: D
    Description: He so in tune with nature due to his time in it and his dragon abilities that if something that not from this earth (Earth-616) then he can usually tell who or what straight away if he gets close to it.



    Name:(Leave blank until A-Level)
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    Rank:
    Description:


Weapons/Devices:(2 D-Level weapons if you have weaponry spec if not you start with none)

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    Item Description: (What it looks like)
    Patent: (If you or someone else has this item patented)
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    Item Name:
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    Item Description: (What it looks like)
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    Item Power: (What the Item does)



The Background


History:

Marcus was born to normal human parents with a twin sister in Australia. His parents where into getting back to nature in a good way they always take time to go camping and teach their children about it. So as Marcus was growing up he learnt all about nature but when he started school he got picked on. He just did not do anything to provoke more but when they started to pick on his sister and family. That when the trouble started he got into many fights over that but his parents understood that he was only protecting his sister and family form people that wanted to bring them down.

Then around the 12th year on this world is when his powers started to show and change his appearance it also when his sister’s mutanted powers started to show and they were the power over flames and producing them with Marcus around he could always eat the flames if she had a flare up for his power while made it own troubles was easier to control. One night he had a call from a friend that needed help but that turned out to be a set up for a group of mutant haters and at the same time they attack his home while his sister tried her best to hold them back she had one of her flare up and burnt not only herself but the home and the parents to ash. By the time that Marcus made it back it was just ash he was a wreck for his ownly known family was gone that when a recruiter for a Professor Kagan's Institute Of Progressive Development came and offered a place there and a new start.


Last edited by Marcus stone on Fri Sep 28, 2012 6:31 pm; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : Fixing a few things)
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PostSubject: Re: Marcus Stone(Mutant)   Wed Sep 26, 2012 10:23 pm

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—Main Power: Dragon Physiology
Due to having Dragon Physiology have the ability to harness all the powers of a dragon with some limits but most will follow branching table. The powers are:
Life-Force Constructs Will be the main focus of his powers and because of this has a very large well massive pool of Life-force energy that extends to
Semi-Immortality (Many dragons are depicted as ageless creatures, but can still be killed) this is because of his massive life-force. Also because of this he not affect by most human illness but the mutant one still affects him.
Magic Immunity to a degree will be immune to same rank or lower spells but if they are made to combat a dragon then will affect the same.
Branching powers(Follows the table):
Enhanced Strength
Enhanced Intelligence due to the ability to access his DNA memory which is memory of his forefathers link to his DNA
Enhanced Senses
Dermal Armor just under the skin and give the skin a scale like look.
Wing Manifestation (Later on)
Elemental Breath
Enhanced Bite
Claw Retraction
Prehensile Tail Due to shapeshifting can ‘grow’ this out at will
Blade Retraction able to produce a small blade from their tails, mature users can grow more than one edge.
Elemental Devouring
Shapeshifting Stemming to Camouflage changing scale color to match surroundings and Size Manipulation
Omnilingualism (For all spoken tongues he takes longer to learn the written form but still at a faster rate.)


Just give the meat and potatoes of the power. The rest will be broken down into abilities. This is way too much just need the general info on the power.
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PostSubject: Re: Marcus Stone(Mutant)   Wed Sep 26, 2012 10:34 pm

Edited it hope it slim enough now.
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PostSubject: Re: Marcus Stone(Mutant)   Wed Sep 26, 2012 10:56 pm

Ok, dude. First, take out all the branching powers that are in your Dragon Physiology description. You don't need and we don't want any of that. Those same things can be later submitted into abilities where they will either be denied or accepted.

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—Name: Life-force constructs
—Rank: C+
—Power: Dragon Physiology
—Description: Can make any object the user can think of out of their life-force energy since this is a power that Marcus is still learning to use he limited to how many constructs he can make at a time. Also he uses his life-force and left over nature life force in no way can he use other people life force. the size limit to this is 3 metre long with the max width being a metre. so he can only make hand hold weapons and tools which have the same breaking point as any normal thing.
C-Rank 3 constructs
B-Rank 5 constructs
A-Rank 10 constructs
S-Rank 30 constructs

Any normal thing is actually a broad term for basically... everything that exists in the world. Choose a specific durability. Steel would be a common choice for a C rank construct. Is he able to control them once he forms them or can he just wield them as if they were always there? What happens if a construct is broken? Can he be harmed from utilizing too much life force for these constructs? Is he adept enough to create intricate items or are they any crude object he can think of?

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—Name: Predators Instincts
—Specialty: ] Physical Powess/Hunting
—Rank: C
—Description: By using the instincts of a Predator Marcus can syc with his opponent body rhythm gaining a small insight in what they are going to do next and therefor being able to block it or dodge it easy as pie. This gives a 10% boost to reflexes.
This would only fall under Physical Prowess; you don't need both.

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History:

Marcus was born to normal human parents with a twin sister in Australia. His parents where into getting back to nature in a good way they always take time to go camping and teach their children about it. So as Marcus was growing up he learnt all about nature but when he started school he got picked on but he just did not do anything to provoke more but when they started to pick on his sister and family. That when the trouble started he got into many fights over that but his parents understood that he was only protecting his sister and family form people that wanted to bring them down.

Then around the 12th year on this world is when his powers started to show and change his appearance it also when his sister’s mutanted powers started to show and they were the power over flames and producing them with Marcus around he could always eat the flames if she had a flare up for his power while made it own troubles was easier to control. One night he had a call from a friend that needed help but that turned out to be a set up for a group of mutant haters and at the same time they attack his home while his sister tried her best to hold them back she had one of her flare up and burnt not only herself but the home and the parents to ash. By the time that Marcus made it back it was just ash he was a wreck for his ownly known family was gone that when a recruiter for Professor X school come and offered a place there and a new start.

For the history you might want to check if being part of Xavier's Institute is allowed.
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PostSubject: Re: Marcus Stone(Mutant)   Thu Sep 27, 2012 1:56 am

Edited the power and ability hope it works now with the power i keeped some of the things in there so that he can do it and no one can call foul on me.

hope that the history ok i am only using the mutant school as a plot tool and he out of it now.
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PostSubject: Re: Marcus Stone(Mutant)   Thu Sep 27, 2012 10:08 am

Just put Dragon Physiology under the power, cause we have the Superpower Wikia that already gives us the applications of it.

There is an institution here that serves as the Xavier school, but the canon school was never created here. So remove Xavier's school and replace it with "Professor Kagan's Institute Of Progressive Development"

Marcus wrote:

—Name: Rolling with the punches
—Specialty: Physical Powess
—Rank: C
—Description: Due to a slightly rough childhood Marcus has learnt how to roll with punches or other attacks that are melee to reduce the damage done to him. A reduction to melee damage by 5%

You can boost this to 10 percent


Marcus wrote:
—Name: Life-force constructs
—Rank: C+
—Power: Dragon Physiology
—Description: Can make any object the user can think of out of their life-force energy since this is a power that Marcus is still learning to use he limited to how many constructs he can make at a time. Also if he tries to go beyond the size limit then it will feel like someone grabing his life force and choking him though it. Also he uses his life-force and left over nature life force in no way can he use other people life force. the size limit to this is 3 metre long with the max width being a metre. so he can only make hand hold weapons and tools which have the same breaking point as Titanium. most hunting gear he can make as if they are really there not made out of life-force there for they will work the same as their real counterparts. anything that not hunting gear and is not just smiple it make up takes time to make (2 to 4 posts depending on how complex it is say a laptop that will take 4 posts to get a perfect copy of it. A kantana on the other hand since it simple but the blade is complex in layers it will take 2 post to make a perfect copy.) once they are made it like a living part of Marcus and he has little control to change them but for small things like sharpness and what not. If any of them do break it be like a small local explodsion happens like that of a middle size firework going off.
C-Rank 3 constructs
B-Rank 5 constructs
A-Rank 10 constructs
S-Rank 30 constructs

Middle sized firework meaning what? Like a bottle rocket?
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PostSubject: Re: Marcus Stone(Mutant)   Fri Sep 28, 2012 2:24 am

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PostSubject: Re: Marcus Stone(Mutant)   Fri Sep 28, 2012 8:46 am

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once they are made it like a living part of Marcus and he has little control to change them but for small things like sharpness and what not. If any of them do break it be like a small local explodsion happens like that of a middle size firework going off (A bottle rocket but more a like to the old ancient china fireworks that use a mortar like tube as a launcher.)
specify the size of the blast

please try to correct the serious grammer mistakes it makes parts of your application hard to read
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PostSubject: Re: Marcus Stone(Mutant)   Fri Sep 28, 2012 6:43 pm

still some pretty bad grammar but it's manageable
unless someone has a problem you are approved dragon boy
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