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PostSubject: Fleshy done   Fleshy done EmptyMon Sep 17, 2012 5:23 am


Hiiro Nakamura
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The Biography


Birth Name: Hiiro Nakamura
Aliases: White Star
Gender: Male
Age: 37
Birth Date: 21.08
Class: Fleshy aka Elite Human

Appearance:
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Physically, Hiiro has pure white hair in spiked fashion and appears not to have a recurring pattern in it's style. He has green eyes as well, which contain the Star Clan's star pupils. In addition to how these stars sometimes grow in size, Hiiro's eyes also sometimes glow a bright red, ultimately making the pupils disappear as a whole. His body has a quite muscular built and right away one can spot that he was trained to fight from the day he was born. From up to bottom he wears clothing that is colored in just white, with gray gauntlets and a gray belt. He wears a long white scarf that covers his whole face up to his eyes. Lastly, Hiiro wears a bandana equipped with a metal forehead protector that contains a trident-like marking each side of the plate. Due to his selection of clothing he had gained the name White Star.

Personality: Hiiro is an incredibly dark and ferocious individual who obsessed in power and wealth. His common facial expression would be that of eerily angered eyes, which could easily illustrate his personality and blood-lust. He kills without mercy, even to people who rightfully deserve it, and feels pride in doing so. His murderous rampages would leave him with the feeling of victory, to which he basked in continuously, to the point where he chose to base all of his morals around the theme of winning. This made Hiiro completely fall into his own madness, disregarding the need to follow any type of determined path but that of victory. He becomes irritated by others who seem to try to employ paths for him to take, immediately disregarding them and adverting his attention right after he determines that the person will continue to try to convince him. People's persistence may commonly lead him to become violent, and using force to silence them. Hiiro takes amusement to people who seem to be of lower skill level than he is, commonly showing a cruel smile with slight laughter towards them. He also laughs when people regonize just how powerful he is and become amazed or scared. In his eyes, he has only one thing to fear, and that was losing. The idea that he may be defeated one day caused him to quake in terror, shaking him to the soul.



The Capability


Rank: C

Specialties:

    Main Specialty: Weapons Expert
    Sub Specialty: Physical Prowess
    Sub Specialty: Hunter


Skills:
    Name: Enhanced Speed
    Specialty: Physical Prowess
    Rank: C-S
    Description: Because of his superior training compared to others Hiiro can run really fast for a human. At C-Rank he runs at the speed of 14MPH. At B-Rank he runs at 18MPH, At A-Rank he runs 24MPH and at S-Rank he runs 30MPH

    Name: Enhanced Hearing
    Specialty: Physical Prowess
    Rank: C-S
    Description: Being trained on a mountain made Hiiro use to his surroundings but also wary of everything around him. Because of this he adapted to hearing things better. At C-rank the user can hear a pen drop from 3 blocks over. At B-Rank he can hear a pen drop 5 blocks over. At A-Rank it becomes 8 blocks and at S-Rank it becomes 10 blocks in distance

    Name: Enhanced Agility/Acrobatics
    Specialty: Physical Prowess
    Rank: C
    Description: Because of his training Hiiro has become adapt in getting in and out of situations that cause for extreme skill in such. These include climbing and scaling buildings, running on walls and or general acrobatics.

    Name: Modern Ninja
    Specialty: Weapons Expert
    Rank: C-S
    Description: Hiiro is a modern ninja who knows all that there is to know about explosives. He can recognize them by either the smell of the materials or by the sound of their mechanism. He can disarm bombs of a rank equal to the rank of this skill or lower. Of course, it only works if the level of the bomb equals the level of the skill.

    Name: Bomb Proficient
    Specialty: Weapons Expert
    Rank: D
    Description: Hiiro can use bombs of all kinds, from simple ones all the way to the more complex ones.

    Name: Ninja Art Whistle
    Specialty: Hunter
    Rank: D
    Description: Hiiro is a ninja, but he is also a skilled hunter. After a lot of time spent on hunting he had learned to imitate animals by producing their mating calls. He can use this skill to lure dinner by tricking it into thinking that they will find their partner.


Weapons/Devices:
    Name: Ninja art GUN
    Appearance:
    Spoiler:
    Rank: C
    Description: The gun certainly looks impressive, with an evenly applied silver finish which appears to be quite resilient, with no sign of wear on this gun from my or its previous owners use. Markings are, as one expects of TM guns, clear and well defined and TM have either paid or decided to ignore IMI to include licensed markings, so it no longer bears the laughable 'Dezart Eagle' markings. Picking the Desert Eagle up, you are, if anything, even more impressed as, despite being mainly plastic, the gun is well over a kilo in weight. There is no magazine weighting trickery (as seen on the Hi-Capa 5.1") here, either, with the vast majority of the weight in the gun itself. The magazine is a brightly chromed and nicely engraved with round counter markings as per the real thing - Just 7 rounds! External metal parts form a small proportion of this big gun's surface area, but the trigger, hammer, safeties and sights are metal and a lot of the internals are pretty solid feeling metal parts. The old Dezart Eagle had it all except performance and capacity. TM corrected the capacity, by upping this guns to 27 rounds and set about giving the Desert Eagle the performance to match its image. Carrying out my standard 5m/6 round, off hand test, this kick produces less accuracy than the weedy earlier release. I am pretty sure that it would match the older gun from a bench, but the kick throws your aim off, requiring a realignment. The best 5 grouping is 4.3CM (1.8 inch) across, but there are 3 shots in a very tight group, right on the aim point. However, the remaining 3 shots are spread around, albeit, still well within the target center. Over 10 shots, the TM Desert Eagle Hardkick averaged a mighty 315 fps (using Propane and the Airsoft Innovations adaptor, with .2g Excel BBs) indoors (at 21C).
    Origin: Stole it


    Name: Ninja Art SHURIKEN (x15)
    Appearance:
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    Rank: C
    Description: The weapon of modern ninja, exploding shuriken. This shuriken is as large as any other traditional shuriken used by ninja, but it has a single metal piece that looks cool since it had been decorated. Inside this metal plate there is a explosive with enough force to create a mini explosion with a 30 cm diameter. It can't kill anyone unless it manages to explode near a vital spot, guarding ones vitals with their hands will only result with 2nd degree burns. The explosion is detoned throuhg a small switch located at the palm of Hiiro's right gauntlet. Other than their explosive nature they can be used just like any other shuriken to kill or disable opponents.
    Origin: Stole it


    Item Name: Ninja Senbon
    Item Rank: D
    Item Description: Ninja senbon are actually throwing needles which ninja use to quietly kill someone or to quietly disable them. They are made out of steel and are quite sharp. Their length is that of thirty centimeters and there is fifteen of them in one pack. They have no special effect or special characteristics, they are just your average throwing needles. Their are also not so thick, a C-Ranked weapon can easily break them.
    Patent: N/A
    Item Image: N/A
    Item Power: N/A



The Background


History:
Hiiro was a member of the notorious Nakamura Clan, a clan of Assassins infamous in account that they would do anything for money. Eventaully, money wasn't enough, and the clan started to kill people just for the hell of it. Right after he was born, his parents and the rest of his clan thought him to kill without mercy, at the age of six he killed his first victim, a young boy who came from a village nearby to get some water. Due to the fact that he was trespassing they family of Hiiro ordered him to kill the boy and he did so. They gave him a knife and once he was back, the knife was bloody and he held the head of the other boy in his other hand. His eyes from that day on have never changed, they were full of desire and blood-thirst, nobody else in the clan had eyes such as those of the young Hiiro. At that moment even his parents had feared of the man who he was going to become in the future. But, they were still happy that they got a son who was going to follow their tradition and the way of their clan. The parents of Hiiro were not the leaders of the clan, they were quite low ranked and they kenw that one day their son was going to become stronger than anyone else.

One night, during the time when Hiiro was out killing people for money, a group of Japanese government agents busted into the village where the Nakamura clan lived and they slaughtered everyone with no mercy. The clan had became a threat and they had to get rid of it, this attack was organized by the mafia and the main heads of the Yakuza. Slowly the Nakamura clan was becoming too strong for them and they feared that one day they will become too strong for anyone to deal with them. When he returned Hiiro found his parents half dead on a pile of bodies that belonged to the rest of the clan. Instead of trying to help them he just finished them off and left the place. In his eyes everyone else was too weak to survive and so he was the only one strong enough. This was during the time when he was just twenty years old. After his clan was killed he went to China, India, Pakistan, Kongo, Brazil and Jamaica, training and gaining money by killing different people in accordance to the wishes of his employers. Living like this he spent another 7 years of his life. On his twenty eight birthday he returned to Japan and killed the members of the Yakuza which were involved in the massacre of his clan, proving dominance and claiming himself to be the strongest assassin in Japan.

Now he wishes to claim the title of the world's top, gaining more and more power as he goes along the way. Power is all that he needs and he will not stop until he has gained all of it.



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PostSubject: Re: Fleshy done   Fleshy done EmptyMon Sep 17, 2012 2:45 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Fleshy done   Fleshy done EmptyMon Sep 17, 2012 3:32 pm

Skill one. I need an actual speed he can keep up with. People here could stack up to heaven in terms of speed so you really need a limit in terms of MPH.

Skill two. Running at a human level varies. as of now " At C-Rank he runs at the speed of 14MPH. At B-Rank he runs at 18MPH, At A-Rank he runs 24MPH and at S-Rank he runs 30MPH." Thats the speed chart.

Skill Three. The hearing thing here for humans is like this " At C-rank the user can hear a pen drop from 3 blocks over. At B-Rank he can hear a pen drop 5 blocks over. At A-Rank it becomes 8 blocks and at S-Rank it becomes 10 blocks in distance." Theres your chart.

Skill Four. Ninja's don't really use explosives unless its a jade bomb or a smoke bomb and those are rarely. Anyway you'd need professor for that or a special skill in weapon expert for bombs as your overall skill type.

Skill Five. Can't have dog level smell. You know thats a nono.

Skill Six. Its way to broad in terms of covering way to much with way to little. If you want specialization and be good with weaponry i'd recommend breaking them into their own skills because now they'd just be swung left and right. And for fighting styles you only get 1 per skill.
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PostSubject: Re: Fleshy done   Fleshy done EmptyWed Sep 19, 2012 5:29 pm

Done. I just took a bunch of already approved skills that other people got.
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PostSubject: Re: Fleshy done   Fleshy done EmptyFri Sep 21, 2012 7:00 am

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PostSubject: Re: Fleshy done   Fleshy done EmptyFri Sep 21, 2012 1:58 pm

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who knows all that there is to know about explosives.

Say most instead, its only a C rank skill after all.

Btw you start with two D rank weapons im pretty sure.

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Hiiro was trained in the arts of Ninja techniques and thus he possesses the skill of using different objects that he picks up as weapons. Everything that he picks up, he can use as a weapon.

This is a C rank skill.
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PostSubject: Re: Fleshy done   Fleshy done EmptyFri Sep 21, 2012 2:03 pm

Better?
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