Pyrrhus
Posts : 71 Join date : 2012-09-08
| Subject: Hail Chthon (PRESTIGE) Fri Sep 14, 2012 5:12 pm | |
| Topic Name: Hail Chthon Topic Link: Hail ChthonTopic Participants:Pyrrhus [Pyrrhus] - [Collective] Chthon (NPC) [Blaine] - [Collective] Topic Description: Chthon approaches Pyrrhus, Pyrrhus uses big words, Chthon is impressed. Thusly Pyrrhus made it clear what's happening and tells Chthon who freed him, and making him realize that indeed he has allies, despite the Dark Lord not needing any. Regardless. Chthon frees himself and makes a complex ritual to free himself from the dimensional entrapment he suffered, and sallied forth to meet the Phoenix from then on, with Pyrrhus a component in freeing the dark being of all the world's evils. | |
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The Superior Spider
Posts : 1147 Join date : 2012-05-23
| Subject: Re: Hail Chthon (PRESTIGE) Tue Sep 25, 2012 9:26 pm | |
| Length: 1 (For obv reasons) English:
Pyrrhus [Pyrrhus] - [Collective] - 5 Chthon (NPC) [Blaine] - [Collective] - 5
Quality of Story: 2 (Could of had more build up with his arrival, and I understand there was a rush, but I can't base judging off that alone)
Quality of Writing:
Pyrrhus [Pyrrhus] - [Collective] 9 [It was between a 8 - 9, but it was for plot so auto 9 in my eyes] Chthon (NPC) [Blaine] - [Collective] 7 [One post..It shouldn't have been 7 but it was for plot I suppose]
Faction: The Collective - 3
Total:
Pyrrhus [Pyrrhus] - [Collective] - 17 Chthon (NPC) [Blaine] - [Collective] - 15
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The Superior Spider
Posts : 1147 Join date : 2012-05-23
| Subject: Re: Hail Chthon (PRESTIGE) Tue Sep 25, 2012 9:30 pm | |
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