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PostSubject: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:57 am



    Name:Chi Strike
    Rank:C
    Power:Chi Manipulation
    Description:Charges a large amount of chi into the fists or feet to unleash in one strike. The strike is limited to physical contact, which means it can only be unleashed on a physical object, and is only effect in close range. trike increases the normal attack power of the user and helps him lift 200 more pounds







    Name:Spiritual Meditation
    Rank:C
    Power:CHi Manipulation
    Description:The ability to train one's mind to induce a mode consciousness in order to realize some benefit. It helps in heavy thinking and problem solving, by meditating, it can help in coming to a conclusion faster, helping in investigations, puzzles, conflicts, debates, or other problem solving. Meditation takes two posts





    Name: Elemental Manipulation
    Rank:C
    Power:Chi Manipulation
    Description:The ability to transform one's chi into a certain element to unleash in combat, it adds the elemental to the hands and feet, aiding in combat. Only one elemental can be wielded at one time, and is only good at close range since it is added to the hands and feet. At Level C, he has control of Fire.





    Name:Enhanced Awareness
    Rank:C
    Power:Chi Manipulation
    Description:With the focus of chi, it increases the amount of self awareness, becoming aware if any out side force is affecting him inside, such as possession, reality or time alterations, and pretty much anything out of the ordinary it helps to identify it fast. And it means like, he is pretty much able to identify stuff out of the ordinary faster, he just pretty much is aware of things a little faster then normal people.


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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 12:19 pm

Detail....you are missing a lot of detail. You need ranges, tangible benefit numbers, how does it work exactly. This will help you also giving opposition less vagueness to exploit. Don't trade quantity for quality make sure you put a good amount of detail into these.
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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 2:49 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 10:43 pm

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Name:Enhanced Weapon Ability
Rank:C
Power:Chi Manipulation
Description:With the focus of chi and his Mystic Martial Arts, it helps him in his ability to using his martial art weapons. It's limited to Tonfas, Bo Staffs, and Nunchakus.

This does not apply to Chi Manip, it seems like a skill.
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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 10:44 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 10:56 pm

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Name:Chi Strike
Rank:C
Power:Chi Manipulation
Description:Charges a large amount of chi into the fists or feet to unleash in one strike. The strike is limited to physical contact, which means it can only be unleashed on a physical object, and is only effect in close range.

How powerful is the strike?

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Name:Indomitable Will
Rank:C
Power:Chi Manipulation
Description:The vast power and ability to possess an unusually strong and powerful force and strength of will and willpower. It prevents any type of temptation or persuasion from outside forces that the user can't control. Which means Mind Control, Lust, or any type of enhanced charisma someone might use to control him

Any huh? Denied.

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Name:Spiritual Meditation
Rank:C
Power:CHi Manipulation
Description:The ability to train one's mind to induce a mode consciousness in order to realize some benefit. It helps in heavy thinking and problem solving, by meditating, it can help in coming to a conclusion faster, helping in investigations, puzzles, conflicts, debates, or other problem solving.

How long does the meditation take?

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Name: Elemental Manipulation
Rank:C
Power:Chi Manipulation
Description:The ability to transform one's chi into a certain element to unleash in combat, it adds the elemental to the hands and feet, aiding in combat. Only one elemental can be wielded at one time, and is only good at close range since it is added to the hands and feet.

I'll let you have one element per rank. Pick one.

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Name:Enhanced Awareness
Rank:C
Power:Chi Manipulation
Description:With the focus of chi, it increases the amount of self awareness, becoming aware if any out side force is affecting him inside, such as possession, reality or time alterations, and pretty much anything out of the ordinary it helps to identify it fast.

How fast? Also Time manip and reality manip are banned here just a heads up.
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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:00 pm

Strike increases the normal attack power of the user's hit by 20%

Meditation Takes two posts

I pick Lightning, no fire, no lightning, noooo. I shall have....Fire.

His awareness is 50% higher then normal
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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:02 pm

For the strike increase please use it like a strength boost. Only one attack right? Add a cool down.

Okay thats legit.

Legit.

Meaning what exactly?
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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:04 pm

Cool down is 2 Posts and yes just one attack.

And it means like, he is pretty much able to identify stuff out of the ordinary faster, he just pretty much is aware of things a little faster then normal people.
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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:11 pm

Sounds cool, tell me when you edit that all in.
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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:12 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:14 pm

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    Name:Chi Strike
    Rank:C
    Power:Chi Manipulation
    Description:Charges a large amount of chi into the fists or feet to unleash in one strike. The strike is limited to physical contact, which means it can only be unleashed on a physical object, and is only effect in close range. trike increases the normal attack power of the user's hit by 20%






Like pounds he can lift bro
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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:15 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Power of Chi Part Two (Abilites)   Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:17 pm

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